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About a big guard dog and an even bigger misunderstanding. ^^ Hope you like it!
Contains German shepherd/cat SV
P.S. Thanks to Akela for helping me with the story!
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Posted by CanisLupisVulpe 15 years ago Report
Besides of a couple of things, it's a good read. The vore scene is nicely done. Not too detailed. I also like the humor. If you plan on having a smoker in another story, the one thing I suggest is just say "he pulls out a cigarette and lights it." Short and too the point. Keep up the good work.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 15 years ago Report
Good story. I like non-fatal vore, and this is a good example. I'd tend to agree, the humor is nicely done, and I ended up feeling for both the delivery person and the guard dog by the time it was over. :)