Here is the story I promised ^^ This story slightly derives from how I normally write, I was reading “Pride and Prejudice†and the time and I want to give that style a shot. I am thinking I will go back to my normal style ^^ Sorry if some parts of this story don’t make sense. I am kind of a heavy Felarya fan fiction writer, but since not all more work on that subjects have significant vore scenes I am probably not going to post those stories here. So if you don’t know what’s going on, its because I am making reference to stuff you never read. ^^; Ryla belongs to my friend Gregole, who has a gallery on here too http://aryion.com/g3/showgallery.php?id=159658 he is ten ways of awesome ^^ Katrika belongs to another cool person that I know, http://zoekin.deviantart.com/ I am not sure if he is a member here or not. Hope he doesn’t mind me linking him ^^; And Felarya and Temi belong to Karbo whom we all know and love. Go give him a hug ^_^ ….DO IT!

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Posted by LOLWUT 17 years ago Report
This wasn't bad! There were a few spelling errors, but nothing too bad, and the characters were fun. Had to say tho, I liked the unfortunate soccer players a bit more than Lynn, but ah well. Keep up the good writing!