Story 19 - Lost in Felarya, ch 3
By French_snack -- Report
Felarya is Karbo's creation, as are the non-human species in this story. All characters here are my own.
Chapter 2 is here: http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=168537
Chapter 4 is here:
http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=169695
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Posted by Tsavo 17 years ago Report
I'm really digging the story thus far. Your paragraphs are well formatted btw.
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Thank you.
I just hope all the characters aren't too hard to keep track of... I know there are a lot, and each one can only get a fairly small amount of "screen time" per chapter.
Posted by Sothe 17 years ago Report
I think your a very good writer. It's not too often that I actually get lost in any story, much less a vore story on eka's portal. Keep up the good work =).
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Thank you! Comments help keep me motivated. ;) Glad you liked it.
Posted by Karbo 17 years ago Report
Another great chapter ! Emotion, suspense, action ( and vore X3 ), the mermaid attack was just superb ! :D
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Thanks! After two chapters without much detailed vore, I thought it was time for a proper vore scene. ;) And bridges are dangerous places in Felarya!
Now that they've reached Ur-Sagol, we'll see what they do next...
Posted by rjw14 17 years ago Report
Dude, as much as I hate lost, I'm liking where this is going ^^
Posted by French_snack 17 years ago Report
Thank you! It's ironic that "Lost" was my inspiration, then. ;)
I'm hoping to start writing chapter 4 within the next few days.
Posted by rjw14 17 years ago Report
Hey, sometimes irony is the way to fly :P
Posted by oishi1 14 years ago Report
well, I'm hooked. You are blending just the right amount of character development and "content" to make it fun to read.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Thanks. I hope you continue to enjoy it. :)