This is exceptional! The characters fit well enough into the brutal mindset of the battle, most especially Aquillia. The description of the vorish scenes, though brief, adds to the sheer enormity of the clash, although I must say I quite like the imagery of Aquillia lounging about, bulged and full. I, too, look forward to seeing more of the pair, and will have to go back to read over 'Dragon in the Dining Hall' once more. :> Well done.
Why thank you! I appreciate it. I'm glad the characters came across well. Thredoric, who didn't appear in the original story, isn't exactly a warrior king, though he will fight if need be (as seen, obviously), and Althea isn't a fighter at all, Aquillia isn't used to large battles, since... well, human armies could best be described as a moving picnic for her. I'm glad you enjoyed the vore scenes, and yeah, they were brief. Hopefully I'll have something more vorish next time. I'm glad you enjoyed this as well as Dragon in the Dining Hall. And, again, thank you.
This is a really well done piece. Great character development with a detailed fight scene. I guess to get to a dragoness's heart is through her stomach.^^
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Posted by Stalbon 17 years ago Report
This is exceptional! The characters fit well enough into the brutal mindset of the battle, most especially Aquillia. The description of the vorish scenes, though brief, adds to the sheer enormity of the clash, although I must say I quite like the imagery of Aquillia lounging about, bulged and full. I, too, look forward to seeing more of the pair, and will have to go back to read over 'Dragon in the Dining Hall' once more. :> Well done.
Posted by Jurodan 17 years ago Report
Why thank you! I appreciate it. I'm glad the characters came across well. Thredoric, who didn't appear in the original story, isn't exactly a warrior king, though he will fight if need be (as seen, obviously), and Althea isn't a fighter at all, Aquillia isn't used to large battles, since... well, human armies could best be described as a moving picnic for her. I'm glad you enjoyed the vore scenes, and yeah, they were brief. Hopefully I'll have something more vorish next time. I'm glad you enjoyed this as well as Dragon in the Dining Hall. And, again, thank you.
Posted by Slash 17 years ago Report
This is a really well done piece. Great character development with a detailed fight scene. I guess to get to a dragoness's heart is through her stomach.^^
Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
Good work! It takes a familiar theme, and alters it quite neatly.