Posted by LightSpeed 14 years ago Report

Awwwwww, such a lovely ending. ^.^ I like the little addition of the tree falling in the background. =3

Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report

Thank you, it seemed appropriate after what had just happened between them.

Posted by LightSpeed 14 years ago Report

True. ^^ I never figured Mewtwo to be a closset Voraphile though. >=3

Posted by BlackRose 14 years ago Report

Nice ending, I loved this story and power does do that... I like how she made the choice though, power does hurt other people like that.

Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report

It was surprisingly difficult to write that inner conflict Renamon had, and how she came to that decision, I'm glad it worked out.

Posted by BlackRose 14 years ago Report

Well, always to determine what the inner workings of anyone is hard. Renamon wanted to grow more powerful, she had the chance, but... love for Zack got into the way, and I was glad she picked that choice. Power usually always corrupts.

Posted by Zephyx 14 years ago Report

I can't even begin to type my feelings on this story. Incredible is putting it lightly and the twists and turn damn near made me cry with joy. Well...you know what I mean x3 Epically done my friend, Rachel will be reading this here shortly too ;P

Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report

You're always so enthusiastic, I love it.

Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report

Another good edition. I like how the story is progressing so far. Although I found the dialogue a bit hard to follow in this one.

Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report

Ah, I was afraid of that. It didn't feel as clear as the others, but after re-reading it so many times, I got to the point where I figured it was as good as it was going to get.

And if you think this was difficult to follow, you should have seen the first draft. Man, that was a train wreck; I wrote the dang thing and I forgot who was talking sometimes.

Posted by Tsavo 14 years ago Report

Haha, I know how you feel. It's difficult to make it clear who's talking without breaking up the flow of the story.

Posted by hunter1243 14 years ago Report

HOLY HELL that was some injury on mewtwo

Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report

Yup, he may be unbelievably strong, but he's not invincible.

Posted by hunter1243 14 years ago Report

i know that but..............shit that ninetails must be strong to do THAT

Posted by keyblademark 14 years ago Report

hehehe that was good to read... mmmm and i can't stop thinking that maybe mewtwo can try vore someday XDDD *grins evil*

Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report

Time will tell :3

Posted by keyblademark 14 years ago Report

good ^^

Posted by kidclef 13 years ago Report

why is a ninetails so frickin powerful? And who's Amaterasu? is she from another series. Dont get me wrong, this is an AWESOME series, but i just need a few questions answered if u dont mind plz?

Posted by Razure 13 years ago Report

Both are from the game Okami for PS2 and Wii
Amaterasu (or Ammy for short) is the sun goddess in a wolf body, she's the main character, and the one you play as.
Ninetails is a boss from the game (not to confused with the Pokémon Ninetales, different spelling on the two of them)

The fight with her is one of my favorite moments of the game for a few reasons:
It’s the most challenging boss in my opinion, the music and atmosphere are amazing during the fight, certain events happen leading up to it that really, really make you eager to take her down; and because Ninetails is the only foe in the game that can counterattack when you use your goddess powers, not even the final boss can do that. (It can defend while you do that, but not attack)

Posted by CybeastFalzar 11 years ago Report

Yeah, i love how theey mixed Digimon, Pokemon, AND Okami in this story

Posted by Razure 11 years ago Report

Not too often so many different universes come together~

Posted by kidclef 13 years ago Report

O yeah i played a demo of that game for the wii. awesome thnx for clearin that up. now i can enjoy this story with a clear head :)