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Fastfood (M/M) Soft/Hard By Gentle_Grounds -- Report

Uploaded: 14 years ago

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A woman is disrespected by an employee for her sexual orientation, and takes matters into her own hands.

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voriator212

Posted by voriator212 14 years ago Report

what do your stories have that mine don't? I'M CURIOUS!!!

Gentle_Grounds

Posted by Gentle_Grounds 14 years ago Report

What ever do you mean?

voriator212

Posted by voriator212 14 years ago Report

cuz no one likes reading them. and i bet they love reading yours... i wanna know your secret.

Gentle_Grounds

Posted by Gentle_Grounds 14 years ago Report

I guess they do. I'm not sure if they do or not. I don't have a secret to writing, it's just my style I suppose -- everyone has their own, you just have to find yours.

voriator212

Posted by voriator212 14 years ago Report

i kinda did. i wrote like full story vore stories, yet no one comments...

Gentle_Grounds

Posted by Gentle_Grounds 14 years ago Report

Have you made a thread about your stories?

voriator212

Posted by voriator212 14 years ago Report

yeh.
two actually

Gentle_Grounds

Posted by Gentle_Grounds 14 years ago Report

That's weird. Well, I know I had it hard getting comments for several of my stories. The vore community, though friendly at times, is not that dependable when it comes to story comments as other fetishes or genres (if vore can be classified as a genre). I have noticed that my most read stories are F/F and F/M. My M/M only get two comments at best.

voriator212

Posted by voriator212 14 years ago Report

oh

Fidel2323

Posted by Fidel2323 14 years ago Report

And here comes the second :/
Great Story, very mean, not a really happy end but that makes a story interesting ^^

Gentle_Grounds

Posted by Gentle_Grounds 14 years ago Report

This isn't the second part. This is an entirely new story. I have discontinued the last story, because it was going no where.

Fidel2323

Posted by Fidel2323 14 years ago Report

oh, thats not what i meant.
you said:"My M/M only get two comments at best."
And my comment was the second ^^ (ok, not really, but i was the second user who commented :D )

Gentle_Grounds

Posted by Gentle_Grounds 14 years ago Report

Oh, okay. Thanks for the comment.

Well, it appears you have a story where a homopobe is eaten.

GoldFox

Posted by GoldFox 14 years ago Report

This was a very good story, but I'm confused... Why do you call it M/M when it appears to be a female pred? O.o?

I know that they are trans, but still I was a little confused.

Gentle_Grounds

Posted by Gentle_Grounds 14 years ago Report

They're males nonetheless, even when they do have a sex change or dress up as women (imo). I wanted to put a twist in my story as the unexpected part of the plot. The reader believes they're women, and expects there to be M/M vore, but doesn't see it until the ending.

Through the character's eyes, they would be women, and to the untrained eye, those males would appear feminine. Only one character out of the rest were able to detect they were men.

Was it a shock for you when you discovered they were men? Or did you expect it?

GoldFox

Posted by GoldFox 14 years ago Report

Well I was confused since they seemed to be women at first, but when you said they were transsexuals, it made sence. I guess I was simply caught off-gaurd initially by your marking it as m/m.

No worries. :3