just when i thought you couldn't possibly do better. you posted an update to your already awesome comic, fast, well done and just as fantastic as the first segment.
keep amazing me man
as for afterwords, i dunno, i'm sure you'll think of something, or are you taking suggestions?
I have some ideas as to what I might do, but I may feel differently when the time comes to actually start a new project.
As for suggestions and requests, sure, why the hell not? Even if I don't run with it right away, if it's something that appeals to me I may very well consider doing it in the future.
That was freakin awesome! Not only are you an excellent artist, you're also a great story teller. It's rare to see the 2 come together so well. I've found a new fave! Many thanks for sharing.
very interesting story and I agree the work is very well done for your stated limits. I hope to see some feet first with the meal -- err girl talking to her swallower as she goes down.
Personally, I hope she ends up with six new slave partners and an increased breast set that makes her even MORE forced to continue her sufferage and has to repeat the process before she is consumed for an even more productive slave. Sue me been watching too much self defeating Twilight Zone third series (2002 version) episodes
(Rod Sterling) For one Kagura (Last name withheld) it seemed like just another ordinary day, as an ordinary slave, in an ordinary slave milking facility.
But today was not like other days. Soon a friend of hers will broach a familiar topic, one she has been giving a great deal of thought. This day, Kagura steps out of the ordinary, and in to...
The Twilight Zone. (/Rod Sterling)
and the end of course would probably include some line about "discovering a new meaning to the phrase, "All you can eat.""
Ugh I hope not as again that sounds far too close to the flat and predetermined almost obvious Forest Whitaker 3rd series where there was none of the imaginative twist of the first Rod Sterling series.
Sterling's imaginative version can be best summed up in the episode "Twenty Two" where the Zone gives the long suffering stripper a chance to avoid her fate on aboard a doomed airplane simply by paying attention to what is going on whereras Whitaker's series is summed up in the episode of "Evergreen" where the society hidden behind the gated community intentionally kills its own rebellious children rather than let them leave if they do not want to be part of the society which ultimately dooming their own future as a society in its own creativity and personality as well as literally if enough of its younger people/children rebel, despite specifically and repeatedly ACCEPTING that fate.
I see this the same way. If Kagura eats all her friends who is to say the slaver simply won't bring in the next batch thus defeating the idea of ending the suffering of the slaves? Admittedly it will these SPECIFIC 5's suffering but they still end up in milk production anyway.
And as far as Kagura goes, if she thinks that this is the end of the situation that would be a surprise finding out that she will now be forced to either repeat the process increasing her own suffering or find out that she has inspired HER controllers to do the same to low producers in hopes of having one great producers rather than ten weak ones.
Or do we find out that this whole situation was Kagura's original plan anyway? Again that would be funny to see the last girl with her face sticking out of Kagura's mouth saying how sorry she is on leaving Kagura all along to continue suffering and Kagura mumbles that she had planned it that way all along as her tongue rolls around the girl's face and slithers into her targets mouth as a last kiss. Then as she is milked with extreme amounts of production made from her eaten and absorded friends, the next group comes in saying how impressed they and their controllers were and hope that when they eat HER they will be as a good a milk mnaker as she was because of eating the other lessor milk makers.
Eeexcellent - you definitely have a talent for the swallowing aspect of things. Like many, I expect, I eagerly await your next installment and the eventual, thrilling conclusion.
Though I'm sure everyone knows what that conclusion will be, the devil, and entertainment, is in the details.
Another excellent sequence. Certainly she has quite an appetite. It's just a pity that we don't know what the girls inside are doing... I guess that as soon as they enter into her belly they are digested.
I love samesize Vore the most, please go on with that story, theres nothing better in the moment, I like Furry Vore when Horses be eaten by other smaller animals
I guess I am a little late to comment on this, but this is great stuff. You have to finish it. If you are looking for what to do next and make a little different, let me point out that you have already done a hands first and head first run. You can still do a feet first and ass first run. It would be possible to do a little fat belly run if you had one of the other girls swallow another and then have her swallowed my the main character. Its just a suggestion but whatever you do, please keep the swallowing pace the same and do finish it. I'll be waiting for more.
Terrific work! I cant wait to see the rest when you finish it, its things like this which drove me to make an account. So in time I could add, but more so I could compliment great work when I see it.
This is fantastic, one of my favourite vore comics so far! ^^
Any chance of seeing inside the belly, perhaps as a finale when she's eaten everyone? Also, are the girls inside able to talk to those outside at all..? Heh, sorry, dialogue between pred and prey is a big thing for me!
Anyway, this is great stuff, just keep making this your own way! ^^
TGE has been left unfinished like this for about 2 years now, and i've been putting in lots of hours recently to finally wrap it up so I can move on. Both of the things you mentioned are things that hold a certain appeal for me as well, which isn't really reflected in TGE for some reason, but is in a few of my other projects (which are also hopelessly behind schedule).
I want you to know just how very happy I am personally that you've decided to finish this story. I LOVE what you have so far and I come back and re-read it again and again. I will be returning even more often to just so I won't miss any updates!
And you'll just have to wait for the remake, sorry. My drawing style has changed since I last worked on this, so it'd just look really weird if I were to pick it up again.
Posted by HeroSoulSword 14 years ago Report
Epic win! Please, keep this going, it is soooo hot. Now I'm getting hungry! ^_^
Posted by SkyLark 14 years ago Report
Rolling with this and finishing the series isn't a problem since it's nothing but pencil work. The real question is what will I do once it's done?
Posted by HeroSoulSword 14 years ago Report
How about whatever you want? Lol. ~_^ Anyway, still great stuff, you're quickly becoming one of my favorite artists.
Posted by voriator212 14 years ago Report
how's about getting a colored version (done by someone else)
is good, but *clears throat* a lil too bright.
Posted by yourprey 14 years ago Report
make another, hehe
but seriously this is the best vore story drawing thing ever!!! ^_^
Posted by Maexam2 11 years ago Report
Agree!
Posted by ssssrrrr4000 8 years ago Report
Why cut this short?
Posted by Livius 4 years ago Report
How about u redraw ur art? To see the differences in your drawing back then compared to now.
Posted by sniprpenguin 14 years ago Report
Good work so far! Can't wait to see the rest.
Posted by Reiko 14 years ago Report
Great set x3 I cant wait to see who slides down next! x3
Posted by smellyhairyhippie 14 years ago Report
just when i thought you couldn't possibly do better. you posted an update to your already awesome comic, fast, well done and just as fantastic as the first segment.
keep amazing me man
as for afterwords, i dunno, i'm sure you'll think of something, or are you taking suggestions?
Posted by SkyLark 14 years ago Report
I have some ideas as to what I might do, but I may feel differently when the time comes to actually start a new project.
As for suggestions and requests, sure, why the hell not? Even if I don't run with it right away, if it's something that appeals to me I may very well consider doing it in the future.
Posted by JEX24ify 12 years ago Report
Well right now, finishing the series doesn't seem to be so much of a bad idea, being 2 years passed already.
Posted by Max_C 14 years ago Report
That was freakin awesome! Not only are you an excellent artist, you're also a great story teller. It's rare to see the 2 come together so well. I've found a new fave! Many thanks for sharing.
Posted by ShadowInukara 14 years ago Report
I want to see more of this and a different section of vore to it.
Posted by max123 14 years ago Report
great work.so what are u going to do once your done with this series
Posted by SkyLark 14 years ago Report
Run around naked humming Batman music.
Posted by Rat_Guy 14 years ago Report
that sounds like fun
Posted by Felfire 13 years ago Report
Mind If I Join U?
Posted by rubberfiend03 14 years ago Report
very interesting story and I agree the work is very well done for your stated limits. I hope to see some feet first with the meal -- err girl talking to her swallower as she goes down.
Personally, I hope she ends up with six new slave partners and an increased breast set that makes her even MORE forced to continue her sufferage and has to repeat the process before she is consumed for an even more productive slave. Sue me been watching too much self defeating Twilight Zone third series (2002 version) episodes
Posted by Kiyoa 14 years ago Report
Crap... I can't help myself.
(Rod Sterling) For one Kagura (Last name withheld) it seemed like just another ordinary day, as an ordinary slave, in an ordinary slave milking facility.
But today was not like other days. Soon a friend of hers will broach a familiar topic, one she has been giving a great deal of thought. This day, Kagura steps out of the ordinary, and in to...
The Twilight Zone. (/Rod Sterling)
and the end of course would probably include some line about "discovering a new meaning to the phrase, "All you can eat.""
Posted by rubberfiend03 14 years ago Report
Ugh I hope not as again that sounds far too close to the flat and predetermined almost obvious Forest Whitaker 3rd series where there was none of the imaginative twist of the first Rod Sterling series.
Sterling's imaginative version can be best summed up in the episode "Twenty Two" where the Zone gives the long suffering stripper a chance to avoid her fate on aboard a doomed airplane simply by paying attention to what is going on whereras Whitaker's series is summed up in the episode of "Evergreen" where the society hidden behind the gated community intentionally kills its own rebellious children rather than let them leave if they do not want to be part of the society which ultimately dooming their own future as a society in its own creativity and personality as well as literally if enough of its younger people/children rebel, despite specifically and repeatedly ACCEPTING that fate.
I see this the same way. If Kagura eats all her friends who is to say the slaver simply won't bring in the next batch thus defeating the idea of ending the suffering of the slaves? Admittedly it will these SPECIFIC 5's suffering but they still end up in milk production anyway.
And as far as Kagura goes, if she thinks that this is the end of the situation that would be a surprise finding out that she will now be forced to either repeat the process increasing her own suffering or find out that she has inspired HER controllers to do the same to low producers in hopes of having one great producers rather than ten weak ones.
Or do we find out that this whole situation was Kagura's original plan anyway? Again that would be funny to see the last girl with her face sticking out of Kagura's mouth saying how sorry she is on leaving Kagura all along to continue suffering and Kagura mumbles that she had planned it that way all along as her tongue rolls around the girl's face and slithers into her targets mouth as a last kiss. Then as she is milked with extreme amounts of production made from her eaten and absorded friends, the next group comes in saying how impressed they and their controllers were and hope that when they eat HER they will be as a good a milk mnaker as she was because of eating the other lessor milk makers.
But that is just me.
Posted by KlinKitty 14 years ago Report
Holy wow o_o This is like, the best vore series I've ever seen, or at least VERY high on the list.
Same size, F/F, willing, every step of the swallowing is detailed...And it's gorgeously drawn. I can't wait for more!
Posted by Rat_Guy 14 years ago Report
how many more girls to go?
Posted by Kiyoa 14 years ago Report
Eeexcellent - you definitely have a talent for the swallowing aspect of things. Like many, I expect, I eagerly await your next installment and the eventual, thrilling conclusion.
Though I'm sure everyone knows what that conclusion will be, the devil, and entertainment, is in the details.
Posted by Mobius_Evalon 14 years ago Report
A continuation already? Life is sweet.
I'd like to go on record as saying that this is the best plan EVER.
Posted by Liz 14 years ago Report
I like this :)
Posted by Max_ap 14 years ago Report
Another excellent sequence. Certainly she has quite an appetite. It's just a pity that we don't know what the girls inside are doing... I guess that as soon as they enter into her belly they are digested.
Posted by SkyLark 14 years ago Report
Since you can't see inside, who's to say what's going on in there? Of course digestion is a part of it, but it's hardly an instantainious process.
Just use your imagination.
Posted by diamonddraq13 14 years ago Report
Probably Sara will now take Sonya inside her too :P
Posted by TableManners 14 years ago Report
Well, that WOULD satisfy her curiosity...
Posted by Maexam2 11 years ago Report
True. But aybe they ccoud have some "fun" first! *wink wink* ^-^
Posted by Monopolus 14 years ago Report
All I can say is....keep it up. I'm blown away o_o
Posted by Eurodex 14 years ago Report
Wow, I love this comic series so far. Its kinda sad and cute all at once. I can't wait to see the rest.
Posted by Deadzombie666 14 years ago Report
LOVED it! Absolutly amazing =P Please, keep it up.
And if you can add some internal shots / digestion.
If you 'can' add digestion, I dont know where your going with this story :P
Posted by PSU Saga 14 years ago Report
Its absolutely amazing, but not to be that guy, but I can help but notice one of the girls' mouths is missing.
Posted by again__again 14 years ago Report
you know how awesome this all is? very. thats how awesome it is.
keep up the awesome!
Posted by Slider 14 years ago Report
So freakin great!
Posted by Sempai13 14 years ago Report
<3
Posted by Gendor 14 years ago Report
When your done, why not make a poll about what the watchers wanna see next? Might do good to see.
Posted by lost_soul 14 years ago Report
Oh yum!
I can't have enough of this. When will be the next page?
Posted by shadowace2007 14 years ago Report
hope vore fight doesn't break out?
Posted by FreeWinona 14 years ago Report
Wow,
like a million comments on this one.
Yeah the bleach was epically sexy.
Posted by Jacquelope 14 years ago Report
LOL this series is too funny! Way to go!
Posted by Lucky 14 years ago Report
This series is sooooooo awesome! O//O
Posted by Byoki-desu 14 years ago Report
I like her face when she's burping ^^
Posted by Junogray 14 years ago Report
lovin it, must see more <3
Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 14 years ago Report
This is great and I totally endorse it. How about she eats a girl stuffed with another girl next?
Posted by icecle18 14 years ago Report
excellent story cant wait for the rest ^_^
Posted by blank 14 years ago Report
awww, i hope more comes soon. great work.
Posted by Mid_Night 14 years ago Report
now that a comic to read, please keep going, i can't wait to read the end.
Posted by neomodus 14 years ago Report
I love samesize Vore the most, please go on with that story, theres nothing better in the moment, I like Furry Vore when Horses be eaten by other smaller animals
Posted by Rich 14 years ago Report
Yes, you must continue with your escape story. Can't leave those other tasty meals outside when their friends are in that sexy big boobed girl.
Posted by Scaylid00d 14 years ago Report
This story is AWESOME!!! ♥
I emplore you to continue! :D
Posted by EPHiro 14 years ago Report
I guess I am a little late to comment on this, but this is great stuff. You have to finish it. If you are looking for what to do next and make a little different, let me point out that you have already done a hands first and head first run. You can still do a feet first and ass first run. It would be possible to do a little fat belly run if you had one of the other girls swallow another and then have her swallowed my the main character. Its just a suggestion but whatever you do, please keep the swallowing pace the same and do finish it. I'll be waiting for more.
Posted by naruto7568426 14 years ago Report
Wh-What? It's not done? *frowns* Oh man...I was really looking forward to seeing the rest of this...
Posted by River 14 years ago Report
Yes. Please continue!
Posted by Cobalt 14 years ago Report
Awww... This makes me sad.. T-T It was/is so nice, I want to see the rest... Pleae continue! =D
Posted by Redatheart 14 years ago Report
MOAR
Posted by AmonPyro 14 years ago Report
WE NEED MORE
Posted by Znonymous 13 years ago Report
Win all around. Would love to see more, And mabie some breast growth from all her food.
Posted by LoveLeavs 13 years ago Report
dude keep the shit coming
Posted by VoreLover666 13 years ago Report
Wow, I hope you decide to continue this series... o.o
Posted by Decimos 13 years ago Report
Where have you gone! I...need...more...help me...I'm goina...pass out...*Collapse*
Posted by River 13 years ago Report
Srsly, Moar Plz.
No, seriously, more of this, please.
Posted by Bright 13 years ago Report
Love the expressions.
Posted by delekn529gf35 13 years ago Report
please keep this going. it's so awesome. I will not forgive you if you don't
Posted by neomodus 13 years ago Report
MORE MORE MORE
pleasssssssssseeeeeeeee
Posted by Marcus R 13 years ago Report
Great comic please continue it.
Posted by zain menloe 13 years ago Report
If you don't finish this, I fear there will be a riot outside your house... O.O
Posted by Impact 13 years ago Report
Hey, does anyone knows what happenned to SkyLark? I loved this comic so far! I'd wish he would finish it!
Posted by Prometheus 13 years ago Report
Terrific work! I cant wait to see the rest when you finish it, its things like this which drove me to make an account. So in time I could add, but more so I could compliment great work when I see it.
Posted by brainstorm 12 years ago Report
hope continue this eventually man I love it so far.
Posted by KamiKaze1337 12 years ago Report
awesome work man. Keep it up. I might watch ya just for this.
Posted by Felfire 12 years ago Report
Keep it up buddeh! I'd love to see more :3
Posted by SkyLark 12 years ago Report
I'm working on it. And thanks. :]
Posted by Shadowblaze 12 years ago Report
This is fantastic, one of my favourite vore comics so far! ^^
Any chance of seeing inside the belly, perhaps as a finale when she's eaten everyone? Also, are the girls inside able to talk to those outside at all..? Heh, sorry, dialogue between pred and prey is a big thing for me!
Anyway, this is great stuff, just keep making this your own way! ^^
Posted by SkyLark 12 years ago Report
Thanks
TGE has been left unfinished like this for about 2 years now, and i've been putting in lots of hours recently to finally wrap it up so I can move on. Both of the things you mentioned are things that hold a certain appeal for me as well, which isn't really reflected in TGE for some reason, but is in a few of my other projects (which are also hopelessly behind schedule).
If you'd like to talk more about it, let me know.
Posted by River 12 years ago Report
I want you to know just how very happy I am personally that you've decided to finish this story. I LOVE what you have so far and I come back and re-read it again and again. I will be returning even more often to just so I won't miss any updates!
Posted by neomodus 12 years ago Report
PLEASE go on with that story, there are so much more Girls to eat !
Posted by night22 12 years ago Report
Are you dead? D:
Posted by SkyLark 12 years ago Report
No.
Posted by River 12 years ago Report
Good! *Hugs the not dead person*
Posted by ogigaho 12 years ago Report
Your work is awsome!
Wish i could see next pages! = (
Posted by SkyLark 12 years ago Report
They are right here. *holds them up*
Oh wait...
Posted by River 12 years ago Report
How goes the new ones?
Posted by biohazard 12 years ago Report
the true question is what will happen to her when the others are gone and her captors return? perhaps another victum? or another preditor?
Posted by SkyLark 12 years ago Report
O_o;;
Posted by SkyLark 12 years ago Report
I'm just wondering if I need to change the locks on my doors and/or windows.
Posted by Elf_Sponge 12 years ago Report
If this actually gets done, I'd say almost worth the wait :P Regardless, hope you're doing good.
Posted by 0Anesthetic4u 12 years ago Report
Are you going to finish this? It rocks.
Posted by bigbelliedwolf 12 years ago Report
How do they think being eaten will let them escape
Posted by kidclef 12 years ago Report
PLEASE. FINISH. PLEASE.
Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 11 years ago Report
With the new series going, I have to wonder what happened to this.
Posted by LillyBells 11 years ago Report
It's probaly not gonna get continued or it's gonna get continued very late xDD
Posted by Turbotowns 11 years ago Report
save the one with Hinata Shippuden Hair for last. XD (the one right behind Kagura)
Posted by VoreSkeeter 11 years ago Report
very nice
Posted by mewtwodemon666 11 years ago Report
Nice series, outlines could do with a touch up however, its a wee bit faint. other than that love it <3
Posted by bigmexican 11 years ago Report
when will this be finished
Posted by icekirbeh 11 years ago Report
as Mr Krabs would say,
MOAR!
Posted by algog8 11 years ago Report
May I suggest the guards arrive at one point? then she'll have to eat them too.
Posted by coldfire1200 11 years ago Report
The short hair one x3
Posted by obaka23 11 years ago Report
I really want to see how this ends!
Posted by Redatheart 11 years ago Report
I wonder how many more posts there will be asking for the completion of the series
Posted by Marq 11 years ago Report
As many as it takes, I suppose. XD
Posted by x9comega 11 years ago Report
Come on man! please finish? pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?
Posted by Maexam2 11 years ago Report
More please!!!
SO hot!
I can't help but fap to this!!!
Posted by NotherPacman 11 years ago Report
*starts to draw a story*
*blows off finishing it and makes others*
Posted by e2s86 11 years ago Report
Page 23?
Posted by SkittyMint 11 years ago Report
I really wish their was more ;w;
Posted by WDii 10 years ago Report
Go on pls~
Posted by DragonqueenShyvana 10 years ago Report
you can do that please ready yet I do find it so cool
Posted by softvore001 10 years ago Report
It'd be nice to see it finished XD
Posted by CommanderStar78 10 years ago Report
Please finish this comic
Posted by CommanderStar78 10 years ago Report
Sky please this is one of the best comics every beside your others
Posted by CommanderStar78 10 years ago Report
sorry for the repeated phrase my computer glitched
Posted by SkyLark 10 years ago Report
No worries ~ cleaned them out for you.
And you'll just have to wait for the remake, sorry. My drawing style has changed since I last worked on this, so it'd just look really weird if I were to pick it up again.
Posted by andreispawn 9 years ago Report
nice
Posted by runner 9 years ago Report
Are you ever going to continue this or remaster it???
Posted by Uhedge18 8 years ago Report
You ever plan on finishing this?? Atleast upload sketches :(
Posted by derpsquid42 6 years ago Report
we've been waiting for the remaster longer than the wait for mother 3?
Posted by KingBo0 6 years ago Report
I really wanna see this finished
Posted by DrKillianNight 6 years ago Report
wish you'd finish this
Posted by Observer702 4 years ago Report
Is the rest of this gone or?
Posted by Imwronglads 4 years ago Report
I know u said u were gonna do a remake or something like that, if u actually are could u tell about when it somehow comes out?