Very well done. I say you have the skill to write professionally. Indeed, I could see this being published in the "Hot Blood" book series ' writing2sell.com/covers.htm '
Thanks for the compliment. I hadn't heard of that anthology before. I might check it out. I recognised quite a few names of the contributors. I've still got a long way to go to reach their standards :)
Though I have grown to dislike the power of succubus and other such treacherous demonic forces being unstoppable, it is probably the adventurer deep within me (I started D&D at a young age) screaming to get a swing at the "bitch".
You may not think you are up to professional standards but if you aren't you are so close a good editor would carry you over those last few meters. I wish you would return to writing/posting here so we could see more of your lovely work. Even when I disagree with your outcome or how, I still loved the read enough to propel me through to the end and wanting More.
Only if I moved to somewhere with a very low cost of living! :) The extra money I get from the ebooks is nice, but I can't see myself giving up the day job for a while. :)
Posted by Angel 14 years ago Report
Wow, what a way to go. ^^
Posted by ManyEyedHydra 14 years ago Report
And he'll get to achieve his destiny later on, sort of...
Posted by Angel 14 years ago Report
Got me thinking, perhaps an angel could do the same thing to a black knight. Might be fun. ^^
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Perhaps that was his true fate in the first place?
Posted by deleteend 14 years ago Report
Very well done. I say you have the skill to write professionally. Indeed, I could see this being published in the "Hot Blood" book series ' writing2sell.com/covers.htm '
Posted by ManyEyedHydra 14 years ago Report
Thanks for the compliment. I hadn't heard of that anthology before. I might check it out. I recognised quite a few names of the contributors. I've still got a long way to go to reach their standards :)
Posted by Imrhys 12 years ago Report
Though I have grown to dislike the power of succubus and other such treacherous demonic forces being unstoppable, it is probably the adventurer deep within me (I started D&D at a young age) screaming to get a swing at the "bitch".
You may not think you are up to professional standards but if you aren't you are so close a good editor would carry you over those last few meters. I wish you would return to writing/posting here so we could see more of your lovely work. Even when I disagree with your outcome or how, I still loved the read enough to propel me through to the end and wanting More.
Posted by f4k3n4m3is1234 12 years ago Report
and now he's a professional author XD
Posted by ManyEyedHydra 12 years ago Report
Only if I moved to somewhere with a very low cost of living! :) The extra money I get from the ebooks is nice, but I can't see myself giving up the day job for a while. :)
Posted by f4k3n4m3is1234 12 years ago Report
Oh, my bad.
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
This one's a great erotic story.