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"It's Always The One You Don't Expect"
M Dragon/M Dragon Soft Vore, Rape.

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Anonymous

Posted by Anonymous 14 years ago Report

I rather liked it i did. ^^

Race

Posted by Race 14 years ago Report

Very nice story, Stalbon. I thought it was well-paced and did a good job of describing parts of the vore act that I especially enjoy, like sagging bellies. :)

Anonymous

Posted by Anonymous 14 years ago Report

I enjoyed that, very descriptive, well-written dragon vore aparently set in world of Krynn where the color of a dragons scales determines if he is "good" or "evil". So maybe besides the dragon "racial stereotypes", my only critisism it that it seems rather absurd that a 38 foot dragon would not efficiently swallow a complete buck whole, instead of taking all that time to tear it into pieces and leaving many of the bones. Heck, a 10 foot komodo dragon can swallow a whole deer of moderate size, and your dragon is 3 to 4 times as large! And as evident by the Gold's meal, dragons in your stories are quite capable of swallowing large prey. This was one of the silly things of the early Pern dragon stories, huge dragons leaving a neat pile of tiny bones, though later the dragons became more realistic reptilian predators swallowing all but the largest prey whole. The description of the blacks full belly also didn't set right, considering it was almost forty feet long, yet only some pieces of a single buck made it "plump". I doubt such a small meal could even be detected from the outside, even if the buck has been swallowed whole. But a very nice story all the same.