Hmm, a rather interesting story. Even though all you know about the girl is that she didn't believe the truth and not much more, you, or I, can't help but feel sorry for her as she just gives up. A nice story.
A while back, I had wanted to rewrite this story. Make it considerably longer, show the other victims getting eaten, leading to this scene. Sadly, never got around to it. And also sadly, never had any ideas for a sequel, so it looks like this will remain the only version of this story.
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Posted by Code5 20 years ago Report
Hmm, a rather interesting story. Even though all you know about the girl is that she didn't believe the truth and not much more, you, or I, can't help but feel sorry for her as she just gives up. A nice story.
Posted by Nameless 19 years ago Report
great story, I'd love to see more stuff with horses ^_^
Posted by BellyVetAnthony 12 years ago Report
Ah horse vore the best predators there is Great story
Posted by rugli 12 years ago Report
Always loved this story.
But have you thought about writing more about this feral horse of yours?
Posted by TigerClaw 12 years ago Report
A while back, I had wanted to rewrite this story. Make it considerably longer, show the other victims getting eaten, leading to this scene. Sadly, never got around to it. And also sadly, never had any ideas for a sequel, so it looks like this will remain the only version of this story.
Posted by rugli 12 years ago Report
I did like to encore you to re-write the story. If you want maybe i could help to brain storm ideas what exactly could happen, in pms.