My entry into furry writing, inspired by the RP work of my buds Bannor and Chevy. The first of what's likely to be a series. No sex yet, but there will be at some point. I promise!
Working on getting the formatting to survive the trip into the portal. Bear with me.
I loved it! I really enjoy your style - the detail is great and you put those little touches into your anthro characters that make them interesting and unique. A very awesome First Furry story! Hope to see more!
Wow, that was truely amazing, lovable plot. I really got attached to all 4 of them, all with their own personality and such. Great job, a really tender story ^^
"Prey-glow" is sort of an after-vore effect of having taken such a large living creature into your digestion.
It was suggested by Bannor's previous work and seems to make good biological sense to me. It has shades of the mystical -- which you'll find from time to time in my work. I can't help it.
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Posted by Bannor 17 years ago Report
I loved it! I really enjoy your style - the detail is great and you put those little touches into your anthro characters that make them interesting and unique. A very awesome First Furry story! Hope to see more!
Posted by Davmil3111 16 years ago Report
Wow, that was truely amazing, lovable plot. I really got attached to all 4 of them, all with their own personality and such. Great job, a really tender story ^^
And hum... what's a prey-glow?
Posted by ouroborous 16 years ago Report
"Prey-glow" is sort of an after-vore effect of having taken such a large living creature into your digestion.
It was suggested by Bannor's previous work and seems to make good biological sense to me. It has shades of the mystical -- which you'll find from time to time in my work. I can't help it.
Posted by Davmil3111 16 years ago Report
Oh I see, thanks for the clarification.
And alright, I don't really mind it either anyways.
Posted by Chevys-n-Vore 16 years ago Report
That was really good! Lots of action, a really awesome truck (albeit with bullet holes in it) and best of all, a very nicely done vore scene.