Heh, during the planning for this, I had considered having Mewtwo and Rena become close before having Zack came back in about a year, but that idea was dropped for the current story.
Mostly, but Mewtwo's pursuers will eventually pop up at some point, right? That sounds like more fighting to me!
Gotta guess who it is, or who they are now...
More legendary pokemons, I presume. Perhaps Mew trying to reunite with its copy..?
Would be awesome if we got to see (I mean read) Mewtwo dispatch his foes the same way Rena does.
Yes, this came about for two different reasons. 1) I didn't want the 'aura madness' problem to simply go away, nor do I want Zack to succumb to it again. So I needed to have it be an issue, but at the same time ‘fix’ it somehow. And on top of that, I didn’t want the solution to give Zack too much freedom over his form, hence the time frame he must abide by. 2) Due to my idiosyncrasies I cannot make Zack prey while in his Renamon form…
Well... that does make sense as I do know you have a tendency to avoid a certain species as prey. As a human though... he is prey! So basically giving him more power, but power he cannot have all the time.
I wish I had run into your stories a bit earlier than a year or so after you started writing them, it's an enjoyable series. Also you included Biyomon, in however minor of a role. +Props
Aww, that's amazing! It's wonderfull that Zack and rena are going to have a baby...I have to tell you man, I can;t thank you enough for writing these stories. They always seem to brighten my day. My mate enjoys being a renamon herself, and a very voracious one at that xD We both love reading these stories because it remninds us of our love and affection for each other. It seems like my mate is exactly like Rena....She's sexy, seductive, voracious, highly protective over me, and fun to be with. I also want to say how happy I am that you brought Zack back. Without him, the story would've been missing something. Also, it's a big surprise that Mewtwo was brought back. The biggest surprise though is the fact that Zack and Rena are now going to be parents 0_0
Wow, this is quite a comment. I feel the need to thank you for taking the time to write something so lengthy.
I’m very happy that you and your mate (who sounds amazing by the way) are able to pull joy out of what I’ve written. I will do my best to not disappoint in future chapters.
Posted by LightSpeed 14 years ago Report
Awwwwww, Rena's preggers. <3 Yay!!
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Indeed!
Posted by LightSpeed 14 years ago Report
Heehe, looking forward to the next instalment. <3
Posted by Necroshade 14 years ago Report
Zacks first prey,
that's soo cool.
And Rena is pregnant.
All wishes are fullfild :)
Hm, I already have the next story twist,
Mewtwo is the father XD.
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Heh, during the planning for this, I had considered having Mewtwo and Rena become close before having Zack came back in about a year, but that idea was dropped for the current story.
Posted by Resileaf 14 years ago Report
And all is happy forever...
NOT! Probably.
Well, you're outdoing yourself again. Such a great story... I already can't wait for the next chapter!
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Things will be happy... for the most part.
Posted by Resileaf 14 years ago Report
Mostly, but Mewtwo's pursuers will eventually pop up at some point, right? That sounds like more fighting to me!
Gotta guess who it is, or who they are now...
More legendary pokemons, I presume. Perhaps Mew trying to reunite with its copy..?
Would be awesome if we got to see (I mean read) Mewtwo dispatch his foes the same way Rena does.
Posted by BlackRose 14 years ago Report
Interesting concept with him being able to change back and forth like that. Nice job with this :D
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Yes, this came about for two different reasons. 1) I didn't want the 'aura madness' problem to simply go away, nor do I want Zack to succumb to it again. So I needed to have it be an issue, but at the same time ‘fix’ it somehow. And on top of that, I didn’t want the solution to give Zack too much freedom over his form, hence the time frame he must abide by. 2) Due to my idiosyncrasies I cannot make Zack prey while in his Renamon form…
Posted by BlackRose 14 years ago Report
Well... that does make sense as I do know you have a tendency to avoid a certain species as prey. As a human though... he is prey! So basically giving him more power, but power he cannot have all the time.
Posted by Zephyx 14 years ago Report
I could say a lot of things here, but because my hands are....occupied, I will say just this, yet another fantastic chapter buddy nicely done :3
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it :3
Posted by Hoodoo 14 years ago Report
I wish I had run into your stories a bit earlier than a year or so after you started writing them, it's an enjoyable series. Also you included Biyomon, in however minor of a role. +Props
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Better late than never, right?
And I'm happy you like what's been done so far.
Posted by Mordal 14 years ago Report
Aww, that's amazing! It's wonderfull that Zack and rena are going to have a baby...I have to tell you man, I can;t thank you enough for writing these stories. They always seem to brighten my day. My mate enjoys being a renamon herself, and a very voracious one at that xD We both love reading these stories because it remninds us of our love and affection for each other. It seems like my mate is exactly like Rena....She's sexy, seductive, voracious, highly protective over me, and fun to be with. I also want to say how happy I am that you brought Zack back. Without him, the story would've been missing something. Also, it's a big surprise that Mewtwo was brought back. The biggest surprise though is the fact that Zack and Rena are now going to be parents 0_0
Posted by Razure 14 years ago Report
Wow, this is quite a comment. I feel the need to thank you for taking the time to write something so lengthy.
I’m very happy that you and your mate (who sounds amazing by the way) are able to pull joy out of what I’ve written. I will do my best to not disappoint in future chapters.