Ouch. That was quite graphic. Very well written, though, and it's good to see a stomach scene from a "realistic" perspective now and then.
I like the way you establish Tucker's character. Although there are distinctly unpleasant sides to him -the teacher wouldn't have eaten him if he hadn't grabbed her-, even his grabbing her comes across as confused and childish rather than really threatening. His short life, neglected and abused, makes him very much a victim. He comes across as neither particularly "good" nor "bad" - just tragically realistic.
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Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report
Ouch. That was quite graphic. Very well written, though, and it's good to see a stomach scene from a "realistic" perspective now and then.
I like the way you establish Tucker's character. Although there are distinctly unpleasant sides to him -the teacher wouldn't have eaten him if he hadn't grabbed her-, even his grabbing her comes across as confused and childish rather than really threatening. His short life, neglected and abused, makes him very much a victim. He comes across as neither particularly "good" nor "bad" - just tragically realistic.
Posted by Fidel2323 16 years ago Report
awesome as ever, i dont know what other to write here^^
Posted by lastoneleft 16 years ago Report
A well written story!! Enjoyed it!