Three of the diplomats, uncomfortale as yet with eating human flesh, did not partake much in the feast. Around midnight they head to the palace cafeteria do get some more standard food, and one of the cooks offers to show them around. But when he gets called away, the diplomats get a little more than they bargained for...
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Posted by Stephy 16 years ago Report
Mmmmmm SO MUCH carrot fun!!!!
Posted by KavenBach 16 years ago Report
Yes, the carrots had a lot of fun indeed... ;) For a while they even felt like they were flying >_<.
Posted by Stephy 16 years ago Report
I wonder if they would have the same problem making them stick in me... hmmm.... ;)
Posted by KavenBach 16 years ago Report
Considering the pheromones' effects... yeah, they certainly would. ;)
Posted by Stephy 16 years ago Report
Heh... you're probably right. Their pheromones are affecting me through the computer! I'm sure they're even more potent in person! *gulp!*
Posted by Skorge 16 years ago Report
hmm that was really nice no error/ or noun i could find . really nicely done man my neck hurts so long to read but it wass really interresting.
Posted by KavenBach 16 years ago Report
Um, sorry, but it *DID* get overly long, didn't it. ;-) This after I wrote the first chapter swearing they would all be short ones >_<.
Thanks for the compliment on my writing, too. I pride myself on being very short on the spelling mistakes.
Thanks for reading this long-winded thing, and glad you enjoyed it! :)
Posted by KavenBach 15 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Posted by dkitty 15 years ago Report
Another great chapter. You do have a lot of talent, please keep it up.
Posted by KavenBach 15 years ago Report
Thank you very much. :)
Posted by Selpathor 4 months ago Report
I think this is my favorite of all of your stories/chapters! It covers the whole spectrum of preparation, willing, unwilling, cooking, and more in such an appealing way! It really gets into the mind of a piglet (even if they don't realize they are piglets yet).
A part of me really wants to have a tour of the kitchens myself (despite the risks/consequences) from the same PoV as Maya though maybe facing backwards like any other piglet!