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The narrator discovers that friendships can become more than original, when his friend wants to experience the world from a different perspective.
This is my third M/M vore story; however, this would be my first narration where first person is involved. At first this was difficult to write, because it made me feel uncomfortable with a male predator, writing 'he' instead of 'she'. However, I made it over the hill..er, bulge, and I liked this story a lot. I had fun writing it too.
Personally, I had to think more about the person more so than the gender and that's probably how I got through with this. And, I discovered a little about myself as well. As if I have achieved a new level of acceptance for humankind.
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Posted by Bannor 14 years ago Report
Seeing your announcement in the "Rest of the World" thread caught my attention, and I was curious to see how you'd handle m/m. My initial reaction was "you cheated" by going with the sex change rout, but I stuck with it and enjoyed it. I don't know if it's a common idea in f/m stories, but the idea of eating someone to carry them around awhile was new to me. Overall, a cool story and was surprised how your character opened up towards the end.
Posted by Gentle_Grounds 14 years ago Report
Lol @ cheating. Well, as far as first person that's probably what got me through with this story at first, then I had to connect with the character. I have a M/M story titled "Unbeliever" in my short story second collection that's in third person.
Posted by French_snack 14 years ago Report
Surprisingly, the "fake pregnancy vore" theme doesn't seem to come up very often. You tackled something difficult here, and managed it very well.