Outfoxed #16
By Throat_Wolf -- Report
Janice eats breakfast in bed and plays with plushies, and some loose ends are tied up.
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Posted by Herschal 16 years ago Report
Aww. Cute ending!
Posted by Throat_Wolf 16 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by iliapoerion 16 years ago Report
Story time! Another early Christmas present!
Not to doubt your writing ability, but how much longer do you think that you can keep these half-dozen or so independent story lines in a single world, along with dozens of original characters, going without contradiction? Just out of curiosity. You have so many potential story lines dangling that you could never progress (in your world's time) much beyond this story and still keep writing stories for ages.
*blinks* *rereads comment*
I've forgotten where I was going with that.... Something about the evils of generalization? I dunno. From what I wrote, that is a good thing...
*shakes head* wow, it is late... I've lost coherency...
Umm, loved the story; I hope there are more to come. Preferably one with Tina! Or that one with the dancer/bouncer, they were good.
p.s. Why did Optimus have to die?!? that movie was so sad...
Posted by Throat_Wolf 16 years ago Report
I think you'll enjoy #17. It should go up today (Sunday) or tomorrow I expect.
Posted by iliapoerion 16 years ago Report
I'm not the type to "squee", but if I was, I would be squee-ing quite loudly, and generally being excited and whatnot.
Yay, new chapters!
Posted by Throat_Wolf 16 years ago Report
It may end up being delayed a bit as I realized I have to write something in another series first. But new stuff is on the way!
Posted by Imrhys 16 years ago Report
You weren't kidding about tying up loose ends, but these are only minor points. I'm more interested in Ian and Nancy "loose ends", so I'll be eagerly awaiting #17 ^_^
Posted by Throat_Wolf 16 years ago Report
What loose ends were those, out of curiosity? I can't remember any particular loose ends between them. They're pals and all that now.
Posted by Imrhys 16 years ago Report
*face palms* I really do have to start remembering how poorly inflections translate into text...
The Ian & Nancy loose ends are wherever this story eventually leads, since both of them are main components to the story and character developments :3
Posted by Throat_Wolf 16 years ago Report
You mean Ian and Janice, right? Nancy is someone else.
Posted by Imrhys 16 years ago Report
Okay, I mean Ian and Nancy to the main character, Janice.
Posted by Throat_Wolf 16 years ago Report
Well, I'm not really sure what loose ends there are with Nancy. I mean, she and Janice are in a friendly relationship. They do each other favors and stuff.
As for "loose ends" with Ian, that's kind of the entire point of the series. Those should be taken care of by the end of episode 20. :)
Posted by Geno12 16 years ago Report
Great job on the stories i really like Ian, he's seems like a stabilizing force on Janice keeps her from getting too mean. He reminds me alot of Lucy from your other series