Well set in my falling for a lioness story before the beging.
Pepoe asked me what hapen to zazu becuse i had put him it it .
Well if anyone see Lion king ,know how anyoing Zazu is and full of himself,since becuse of Mufasa.
But what if say Sarabi had engough of taking her mate away to many time,from his fialy her and Simba.
Or leting him sleep,and say Sarabi has her own plan to get rid of Zazu ^.^
Fist vory story
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Posted by WolfFort 16 years ago Report
Not bad pretty easy to fallow. I think maybee to short on the vore stuff.
Posted by sindragon 16 years ago Report
Thanks i was not use to wrting vore ,so romblily why it hsorrter than other pepole vore storys
Posted by countrydog2010 16 years ago Report
Not Bad. Needs some work on spelling though
Posted by luvboobies 13 years ago Report
Luv it
Posted by Gone 10 years ago Report
Spelling and grammar needs some work, and the flow is a little odd, but not bad.