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A stand alone piece that was loosely inspired by the classic folk song of the same name.
Frankie gets in to a car wreck following a party where she discovers her boyfriend cheating on her. After an experimental operation, she finds that her anus is very sensitive, not to mention a tad more elastic...
This is my first shot at an AV story. This is "soft" anal vore, so ABSOLUTELY NO SCAT WHATSOEVER. There seemed to be some formatting errors when uploading it, so the paragraphs have some strange indentations. Meh.
Thanks for taking a look, and thanks even more for leaving a comment :)
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Posted by Hongry01 14 years ago Report
Nice to see a new AV story :)
Posted by Rhewin 14 years ago Report
Well, glad that you liked it :D
Posted by Houyo 14 years ago Report
Well, this was a neat read, and I was kind of surprised in the end that she got caught by the police. You don't ussually see that in vore stories.
Posted by Rhewin 14 years ago Report
Yeah I got tired of preds always getting away. I figure if you do the same crime over and over, you're going to get caught. I'm glad you liked that spin on it, and thanks for the comment.
Posted by Epicurus 14 years ago Report
Color me slightly conflicted. She clearly earned her punishment for the two murders. Rebecca was happy enough, even though she didn't really have a chance to consent, for her death to be good, but Elizabeth and Johnny didn't deserve to die. On the other hand, it's such a waste of a rare and lovely power if Frankie stays locked up forever. Folks who'd love to go that way won't get the chance.
Posted by Rhewin 14 years ago Report
Well, that's what happens when a society not ready for AV runs into a pred :P
Posted by Rhewin 14 years ago Report
P.S. thanks for the comment :D
Posted by Sora 12 years ago Report
I. Loved. That.
Amazing work there Rhewin.
Posted by Rhewin 12 years ago Report
Thank you very much ^^
Posted by Thanatos2k 10 years ago Report
Hey finally some vore realism, with the cops showing up.
Posted by DrRose 3 years ago Report
That prison is gonna lose prisoners dvery fime they take a shower. And each time she's gonna look better and better. I wonder if she could vomit on the wall and melt it? Since she melted the metal in the vibrator. Oh yeah, it's prison escape tims! SEQUEL!