This I hope will be the first of a series of well written chapters about a man caught in a dreamland.
Now if you bother to read this comment i'd like to ask you not to read this just because you think there's vore in it because there isn't, i wan't you to read this so you understand what's happening when you read future chapters which will likely have vore in them.
This is chapter one or even possibly only a teaser so please comment critique and tell me if i should continue or just give up now.....don't say the latter.
Now that i've said there's no vore, no one will read it.
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Posted by Draegonx 16 years ago Report
I liked it the story has a good premise and start for many things. Many twists and many ways it could go. I like the prospect of dreams lol. It is a surreal bizarre thing and i like it. I am interested in it, so keep up the good work if you decide to continue on this.
Posted by Entity 16 years ago Report
The chances are high that i'll continue but I'd rather hear what others thought of the style first. I don't want to find out that it's doomed to fail.
Posted by Draegonx 16 years ago Report
ah i see i see that is understandable
Posted by keyblademark 16 years ago Report
i like it, is a good prologue for the next chapters :)
Posted by Rhewin 16 years ago Report
I don't think it's doomed to fail at all. I'm looking forward to the other parts!
Posted by Entity 16 years ago Report
i guess i best get started on the next section then.
Posted by Rhewin 16 years ago Report
I guess so ;)