That was exactly the point. Vores are people too and they have lives outside of gulping other people. I wanted to make a story where vore was part of the story, not the entire story.
I like how this has been developing. Jaime lost some sympathy from me when she ate the innocent Sandy, but her regret in the last several stories has won her back. And variety in motives is good.
Yeah, when I finished the chapter on Sandy I did see that her eating Sandy seemed wrong. That's what helped me write chapter 5, I needed a solid reason for her to tell James her secret.
Posted by Tai223236 14 years ago Report
I have to say, I've been following series, and I love it. There seems to be a real story undergoing for Jaime as opposed to just vore for vore's sake.
Thanks for posting.
Posted by TerminusOmega 14 years ago Report
That was exactly the point. Vores are people too and they have lives outside of gulping other people. I wanted to make a story where vore was part of the story, not the entire story.
Posted by Cruich 14 years ago Report
I like how this has been developing. Jaime lost some sympathy from me when she ate the innocent Sandy, but her regret in the last several stories has won her back. And variety in motives is good.
Posted by TerminusOmega 14 years ago Report
Yeah, when I finished the chapter on Sandy I did see that her eating Sandy seemed wrong. That's what helped me write chapter 5, I needed a solid reason for her to tell James her secret.