Order of the Serpent Ep. 1

Picks up were Prelude left off. The woman covered in slime apears in a cell filled with slaves. This is the tale of how a would be slave becomes an aprentice to a very powerfull mage. Sasha discovers her lust for vore and gains a teacher and mentor. But first, she must prove herself and trust a woman she doesn't even know whith her body and indeed her very soul.

I wrote the origonal oh, four or so years ago. As I read through it, I was shocked at how porly written it was. lol. Anyhoo I've spent the better part of today trying to make it more understandabel. It's not that it was hard to read befor, I just don't think I made enough of the details clear to the reader. hopfully if you've read this befor on another forum, you'll catch somthing new this time around.

As always comments are very welcome and apreciated.

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