The Biggest Dick of All
By Voreman344 -- Report
This one I wrote, enjoy!
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Posted by Evilpancake 16 years ago Report
It was good up until the end, thats not cock vore, its barely insertion, i was kinda hoping for actual CV
Posted by Voreman344 16 years ago Report
Basically, you're saying the ending is shitty right? :/
Posted by Evilpancake 16 years ago Report
essentially but thats just my opinion, im sure you'd find 100 who agree and 100 who disagree, just seemed like the story was building to a great CV scene, only to get half insertion and popping like a cork... up until that i was at the edge of my seat
Posted by Voreman344 16 years ago Report
I agree with you; It was on of my first stories and it wasn't well written :(
But thank you for the constructive criticism! :D
Posted by delet0h2b69 14 years ago Report
Hopefully he's okay at the end :)