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In a region of the Mystic Wilds seared by a raging sun, beset with famine and plagued by war, it might seem like there's no reason left to go on. But in a run-down theater, a local celebrity teaches his audience that this is not necessarily true.
A Mystic Wilds story.
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Posted by MidnightRose 13 years ago Report
"He humped at the air"
I laughed there. The mental image was lulzy. XD
Straight traps FTW. Amazing piece of work once again. You never disappoint me.
Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report
The pelvic thrust is a time-honored dance step, I'll have you know. XP Glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by nephilim 13 years ago Report
FUCKING AWESOME
Posted by GREGOLE 11 years ago Report
Okay, so, this story has been around for a while(by comment standards), but... dagnabbit, I could never live with myself if I didn't say anything.
This is... well, as far as erotica goes, it's *powerful*. It does a little more telling than showing in places, but it has a dramatic flare that really brings it to life. It focuses a LOT on the moment, and a lot on the emotions, and is all the better for it.
I really do love the way it's consensual, yet fatal, yet HIGHLY romanticized. Some stories try that, and they fall flat. This one tried that and exploded. It's the most passionate vore story I've read, and.... well, I guess I'm a sucker for the dramatic.
Plus "quick as it takes to say it" is just a grand expression I learned from this piece.
Posted by Bitter 11 years ago Report
It's never too late for a comment, especially one as glowingly praising as that. ;) I'm glad you enjoyed it.