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Abby and John decide to have a wild time after spending some time apart.
Based on a true story haha (kinda). The first part of the story is a near recreation of a great night of passion with my GF. Obviously, the vore part wasn't real, but it was a great night.
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Posted by blergle 13 years ago Report
That's actually terrifying. Great job!! The emotional impact is like being smacked in the stomach with a big bag of rocks.
Posted by r0nniel0ng 13 years ago Report
Wow, what a great comment! Thanks a lot! Also, thanks for being my #1 commenter, I appreciate it a lot!
Posted by Swallower 13 years ago Report
That was awesome. Seriously awesome. Especially the sex part.
Posted by r0nniel0ng 13 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked the sex parts! I was worried there was either too much or too little detail, so I'm glad it worked.
Posted by kirche 13 years ago Report
That was great! The way you described the scenes were detailed enough to get a good picture, but still short enough to move along. I also liked that you left the story with two alternate endings; letting the reader decide.
Posted by r0nniel0ng 13 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it! Funny enough, I think the ending is almost more scary/dark without digestion explicitly happening!
Posted by Sora 12 years ago Report
Loved that, great job!
Posted by r0nniel0ng 12 years ago Report
Thanks so much!
Posted by delet0h2b69 11 years ago Report
So did he make it or not :(?
Posted by r0nniel0ng 11 years ago Report
I'll leave that up to the reader. But if I were reading, I'd say probably not.
Posted by delet0h2b69 11 years ago Report
That's so stupid :(, well I say he did because if he didn't then Abby is just a despicable person.
Posted by Indighost 10 years ago Report
what happens next?! <3
Posted by r0nniel0ng 10 years ago Report
I'll never tell. Actually, as I mentioned to someone else, I leave it up to the reader. But if I were the reader, he definitely wouldn't make it. I don't like happy vore endings. This was as close to a happy ending I could write :P