Now THAT was a great read! Fast-paced, interesting and it kept me hooked from start to end. I got a "Queen of Blades" feeling from your Queen. Feels like part of the Starcraft Universe for sure.
*Offers up a hug* A very good piece all told, though as an editor, I spot a lot of misspellings all around, presumably just from some mis-strokes on the keyboard. Giving the story a once over after you've finished it will help cut down on those, in future writings...which I always look forward to, my friend! Again, quite excellent.
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Posted by Masquerade 16 years ago Report
Holy hell.
Now THAT was a great read! Fast-paced, interesting and it kept me hooked from start to end. I got a "Queen of Blades" feeling from your Queen. Feels like part of the Starcraft Universe for sure.
In any case, great work!
Posted by Stalbon 16 years ago Report
*Offers up a hug* A very good piece all told, though as an editor, I spot a lot of misspellings all around, presumably just from some mis-strokes on the keyboard. Giving the story a once over after you've finished it will help cut down on those, in future writings...which I always look forward to, my friend! Again, quite excellent.
Posted by Frocto 16 years ago Report
Tut tut, what an evil girl :)
Posted by kidclef 13 years ago Report
Wow. How am I now just reading this? This stuffs' right up my alley!