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Story 58 - part 2

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BardicLasher

Posted by BardicLasher 16 years ago Report

Very nice story! Well written and entertaining. Would've liked a bit more description in the actual vore parts, though. They went by so fast.

French_snack

Posted by French_snack 16 years ago Report

Thanks. I didn't want there to be *too* much focus on the vore, though, at the expense of the story's flow.