Injuries can sideline so many good workers. This approach to physical therapy might just be the right one for some people. It should be looked into. I promised "Gypa" that I would write a public thank you. Critical remarks are good to help one grow. This is a very wise person who has taught me much.
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Posted by Gypa 15 years ago Report
Your work seems get better and better. Keep up.
Posted by printz 15 years ago Report
Thank you. I have been trying different things. It seems to be easier when I don't try too hard. I use real friends as models. I didn't do that with Greta. I'm still working on more of her. I do listen to you. I credit your wisdom for much of what I'm doing right. I think I should add that to my comment on this last one.
Posted by Shadowfang 15 years ago Report
Your writing style is very good, but I do find there to be a few areas where the dialogue doesn't really have a proper 'flow'. Don't forget to use words like 'That's' or 'It's'. It seems like a silly detail, but words like that really give the dialogue a very natural feeling.
Posted by printz 15 years ago Report
That's a point well taken. I've gone over my writing to fix a lot of it but I can take a little more time. I understand exactly what you are telling me. I will look for those details. I appreciate your comments. Those who tell me what they don't like are the ones who care enough to help others grow.
Posted by Shadowfang 15 years ago Report
If you'd like, I'd be more then happy to proofread for you if you ever need it.
Remember; the difference between a master piece and an art piece is in the fine details!
Posted by printz 15 years ago Report
Thank you. It might be a little while but I am working on something.