Story 60

By French_snack -- Report

Even the very smallest of Felaryan predators have to eat... Catch a glimpse here of one out on the hunt!

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Posted by sansuki 15 years ago Report

Fabulous work- I am always a sucker for a friendly/well meaning predator, even when it ends very badly for the prey!

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Posted by jacquelope 15 years ago Report

Wow, another vore story with a twist. Ched in a way makes Rivwin not want to eat other neeras. Well done!

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thanks! How much it'll have changed her mindset in the long run, I've left open, but it certainly has affected her.

Posted by jacquelope 15 years ago Report

I got one question, though... Felarya heals wounds. Wouldn't some bandages and nice thoughts plus his magic have held the line long enough for him to recover if she'd coughed him up? Which brings me to the question... how injured is 'too injured' for Felarya to heal?

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

I think it's not so much the severity of your injuries, but whether your injuries will kill you faster than the soil can heal you. If your body is shutting down, Felarya simply won't have time to save you.

Posted by vore111 15 years ago Report

i like yhe story its great

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thanks.

Posted by atak 15 years ago Report

I quite loved this story! Very very well done! I loved that she got to talk with her food for a good while, got to be kept company by him as she was still digesting him. That even though he was saving her life and being a bit of a friend to her; she still couldn't help but digest him alive.

I also really loved that he stayed alive so long inside her stomach. This is a bit of a first in your stories, and I have to say I loved how long he got to be inside her. How long he got to experience her busy insides, experience her continuing digestion even as she was waiting for a chance to get away form the dridder and bring him back up.

I also liked the memory she had of her mother soothing her about it being ok to eat tiny creatures. That it can't be wrong to eat something that is so tasty, and makes her feel so good; even if her food pleads with her for it's life!

Great story, ^^ one of my favorite Felarya ones yet!

Posted by French_snack 15 years ago Report

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.