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Alraune

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A shapely young sorceress braves the deep forest in search of the secret of immortality. Weird lesbian sex and vore ensues.

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Cruich

Posted by Cruich 15 years ago Report

This one is very familiar. Did you post it somewhere else in the past? It was good this time, too.

One thing I should note is that you often use the word "it's" to denote the possessive of a gender-neutral creature. It should be "its", as in "It opened its mouth." It didn't appear as many times in this one in particular as it has in others, but some of them had a lot of them.

Otherwise, these stories have many enjoyable themes, and I'm impressed by how many you've written.

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 15 years ago Report

Thank you, and yes, this one was posted on two other sites back in 2008, when I initially wrote it.

Yeah, 'it's vs its' was an issue that plagued my earlier stories, especially the really old ones. I probably should have gone through and re-edited these before posting them, but laziness reared its ugly head again. XD

shabbacabba

Posted by shabbacabba 14 years ago Report

This has to be the best plant vore I have ever read! And the sex wasn't too bad either...

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 14 years ago Report

Thanks! I aim to please. :3

LilyLove

Posted by LilyLove 12 years ago Report

That was a wonderful, sensual tale! I like the plant/girl combination, it allowed for some interesting setups. Makes me think twice if eternal youth is really worth all this trouble :p

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 12 years ago Report

Thank you! This may be an older one, but I must admit a certain affection for the themes herein. :3

thisgirlroolzz

Posted by thisgirlroolzz 12 years ago Report

I had totally forgotten about this story! its very nice, just the right mix of pleasure before the inevitable conclusion to a vore story, it has everything a vore enthusiast could ask for.

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 12 years ago Report

Thanks! Despite being a bit on the old side, I guess there a reason it's one of my most popular works here eh? I suppose I really ought to do a sequel to this at some point.