What type of alignment is Jacqueline affiliated with? I personally picture her as lawful evil for some reason (can't really see Jacqueline breaking any laws besides murder .)...
Also, another question if you might do me the honor. My grammar, how is it? I have concern about it because, quite frankly, I've never used a bracket with in a bracket. As well as adding the ellipsis at the end of the bracket, I don't believe I did it correctly. Correct me if, I've made any mistakes.
Send me a note please if I've made too many mistakes. Thank you for your time. Funny how a question sometimes turns into many...
She's neutral evil, actually. Pretty much just out there for herself, and she likes to step upon others to get what she wants. Gets a thrill out of it.
As for your grammar, I'd need a bigger sample than just this comment to tell for sure, but I only noticed a few mistakes, and they weren't the basic types. Like, it should be "My grammar: How is it?" instead of "My grammar, how is it?" since the question following is an explanation of the first part of the sentence. You also added an unnecessary comma in "Correct me if, I've made any mistakes." As for the brackets in the first part, you did it right except that you shouldn't have put that period in there; the ellipsis suffices.
This is how every adventure in D&D goes with me... of course between my plain meanness and my friend's char's drunkenness (based on real life drunkenness when playing) we usually wind up burning down our starting town anyway.
Yeah... I believe my favorite revenge the DM pulled on me was half way through the campaign I got killed by severe respiratory complications... caused by the common cold.
The DM and I basically try to see who can screw the other over more each time we play, me with wanton chaos and destruction (because you'd be amazed what burning hands can do when mixed with a farming community), and he by, well, foiling me.
The fairy should open her eyes so she can see what is in front of her. No wonder Jacqueline is annoyed, that fairy just flew into her maw. Those wings do not look tasty; this is clearly all the fairy's fault.
Really, she just had a nice yawn, and the fairy was so rude as to barrel forth without thinking.
Good thing one of the wings fell off, though. Less not-tasty material to consume.
Posted by Slash 13 years ago Report
I love those eyes on the second panel. :3
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
A fairy killed her father! I swear!
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
I think they sum up the whole "evil" scene ^^
Posted by Teruyo 13 years ago Report
It's funny 'cause it's true.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
I love fantasy so much. :D
Posted by Redpod 13 years ago Report
Very nice picture _:D
Posted by KlinKitty 13 years ago Report
I bet she was hired by Disney. That fairy is CLEARLY violating their copyrights by dressing like Tinkerbell.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
That's exactly whom I had in mind. :3
Posted by Cougar 13 years ago Report
She better be careful! Faeries give you gas. c.c
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
It's all the pixie dust.
Posted by MeTheMe 13 years ago Report
Being evil is just more fun sometimes! Center your whole party around evil, and you've the makings of a real good time...
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
Except that they all backstab each other. D:
Posted by MeTheMe 13 years ago Report
That's why you DM those campaigns. Just set up the world, and watch the show. :D
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
LMAO
I'd love to sit back and watch one YOUR sessions!
Posted by Mcleod 13 years ago Report
What type of alignment is Jacqueline affiliated with? I personally picture her as lawful evil for some reason (can't really see Jacqueline breaking any laws besides murder .)...
Also, another question if you might do me the honor. My grammar, how is it? I have concern about it because, quite frankly, I've never used a bracket with in a bracket. As well as adding the ellipsis at the end of the bracket, I don't believe I did it correctly. Correct me if, I've made any mistakes.
Send me a note please if I've made too many mistakes. Thank you for your time. Funny how a question sometimes turns into many...
-M-
Posted by Mcleod 13 years ago Report
Within* I can't believe I missed that... I've come to rely too heavily on the auto correct feature.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
She's neutral evil, actually. Pretty much just out there for herself, and she likes to step upon others to get what she wants. Gets a thrill out of it.
As for your grammar, I'd need a bigger sample than just this comment to tell for sure, but I only noticed a few mistakes, and they weren't the basic types. Like, it should be "My grammar: How is it?" instead of "My grammar, how is it?" since the question following is an explanation of the first part of the sentence. You also added an unnecessary comma in "Correct me if, I've made any mistakes." As for the brackets in the first part, you did it right except that you shouldn't have put that period in there; the ellipsis suffices.
Posted by Mcleod 13 years ago Report
Excellent, thank you for answering my questions.
I've always wondered if you added a period at the end of a sentence within a bracket now I know, thank you.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
Welcome!
Posted by Masquerade 13 years ago Report
I never really was on your side! Muahahaha!
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
Ergo: Not a double-cross!
Posted by Tabatha_Cat 13 years ago Report
It's obviously the fairy's fault for hovering right in front of her looking so tasty. I like imagining an "Eeeeeek!" sound effect in the middle panel.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
That's right. Blame the victim. :9
Posted by prisoner 13 years ago Report
She was asking for it.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
That's right. Blame the victim. :9
Posted by maleperduis 13 years ago Report
And don't forget the (potentially) delicious thing they need saving from!
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
I'm sure it was a financial crisis or something.
Posted by maleperduis 13 years ago Report
So that makes Jacqueline... austerity measures?
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
Very likely. :D
Posted by Noctivagus 13 years ago Report
This is how every adventure in D&D goes with me... of course between my plain meanness and my friend's char's drunkenness (based on real life drunkenness when playing) we usually wind up burning down our starting town anyway.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
D:
I totally don't actually do this in D&D. I guess that's because wanton destruction usually results in consequences.
Posted by Noctivagus 13 years ago Report
Yeah... I believe my favorite revenge the DM pulled on me was half way through the campaign I got killed by severe respiratory complications... caused by the common cold.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
That's terrible. And awesome. :D
Posted by Noctivagus 13 years ago Report
The DM and I basically try to see who can screw the other over more each time we play, me with wanton chaos and destruction (because you'd be amazed what burning hands can do when mixed with a farming community), and he by, well, foiling me.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
Sounds like a good gaming session to me. :D
Posted by Noctivagus 13 years ago Report
Well, if you're ever around during one, highly unlikely though that may be, feel free to sit in and help the general chaos that always ensues.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
Very highly unlikely. :P
Posted by Noctivagus 13 years ago Report
It's almost as unlikely as me actually playing a good character and/or doing what the DM wants.
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Wandering damage now has a name: the common cold pre-nyquel!
Posted by Imrhys 13 years ago Report
Sorry for commenting all over your comments page but this piece elicited some hilarious comments that brought back such lovely memories ^_^
Loved her closing comment "Us.." amongst munch munch crunch, LMAO. Nice change in ambiance to highlight the evil in this concept <3
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
Notta problem! This is called a "community" for a reason. :P
And yeah. Those poor, poor fairies. D:>
Posted by Sparky_the_chu 13 years ago Report
woah that was evil o.o.....I liked it :3
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
Hee hee. She's a really horrible person, which makes her so much more interesting. :D
Posted by Leshana 13 years ago Report
The fairy should open her eyes so she can see what is in front of her. No wonder Jacqueline is annoyed, that fairy just flew into her maw. Those wings do not look tasty; this is clearly all the fairy's fault.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
Really, she just had a nice yawn, and the fairy was so rude as to barrel forth without thinking.
Good thing one of the wings fell off, though. Less not-tasty material to consume.