An illustrated story featuring 
melanie_vixen's character Danae as the protagonist.
This thing has nearly every one of my vore kinks in it. There's semi-realism (despite the same-size stuff), a casual canine predator ending a life just for a comparatively small amount of satisfaction, a panicked and helpless prey, getting away with the act of predation, a mawshot, inside-shots, females involved, to name a few. So basically, if you want to know my specific vorish preferences, read this story and look at the pictures. This is one of the best things I've done to-date.
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Posted by Noctivagus 15 years ago Report
I quite like this... it's very well written, and shows a great deal of the psychological aspect of predation I like to see.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
I'm glad. I wrote it for myself, but I figured if I drew attention to everything I stuck in it, it'd be a good experiment to see who shares which interests.
Posted by Slash 15 years ago Report
Mr. Humbugs Grim tales of Nom. :3
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Somethin' like that, yeah. Minus the morals.
Posted by Noctivagus 15 years ago Report
There were morals... like, for instance, if you're a cat, be wary of dogs... or don't stay late after work regularly.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Something like that, yeah. Good, useful morals.
Posted by Noctivagus 15 years ago Report
I never said they were good morals, but they're still morals.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
I suppose! Usually morals tend to be, like, non-specific, though. :3
Posted by Noctivagus 15 years ago Report
I've read stories where the moral was if you squeeze lemons in your eye mr. clean will show up and sodomize you with a rake... the morals I proposed were far less specific than that.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
This is true. Still specific, but not quite that caliber.
Posted by Noctivagus 15 years ago Report
Indeed.
Posted by Radley 15 years ago Report
Was a pretty good read.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Thankya.
Posted by Stank 15 years ago Report
I read this story!
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Me too! Several times!
Posted by vmoartet 15 years ago Report
Good stuff, Humbug! Great pics, great story, and a great product overall.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Thankya much! Glad you liked it. :3
Posted by juicefox 15 years ago Report
Very nicely done. The images realy compliment the story. It really makes you think; in a world where vore is common place, it pays to keep a low profile. With all eyes on you, there's bound to be a few crazies that take notice. And as your story illustrates; it only takes one.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
It's just like the real world, only people use mouths and stomachs instead of guns! :O
Posted by juicefox 15 years ago Report
Sounds like the kind of world I'd like to live in, lol.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
lol
Well, it wouldn't be much worse than this one if that's the only change, so yeah. I could dig it too.
Posted by Len_The_Fox 15 years ago Report
Wow, This was very Nice, Great job Humbug!
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Thank you very much. Writing isn't my favorite thing to do, so I try to make it special when I -do- write.
Posted by dimensione510 15 years ago Report
The pictures really add to the story.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Thankya. I feared I may have overdone them, but hey. It's a vore story, so it should have lots of vorish pictures.
Posted by dimensione510 15 years ago Report
Nah, I think it's a great balance between pictures and words.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Well thanks then!
Posted by Anashi 15 years ago Report
Very excellent story and I love the illustrations with it. ^^
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Thanks much! I appreciate the support.
Posted by Bright 15 years ago Report
I liked how the pictures compliment the written scene.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
I tried. May have overdone it a bit, but hey. I'm primarily an artist on this site anyway. :3
Posted by IGA 15 years ago Report
A story with accurate illustrations is def rare and much needed. Awesome job!
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Thanks! I actually, like, put time into this thing, so that's probably why the illustrations are relatively accurate to what I had in mind when I wrote it. Sam's office is a little sparser than I picture it, but that's because I find it hard to motivate myself to do small details.
Posted by Imrhys 15 years ago Report
It had been awhile since I had read an illustrated story. I had almost forgotten how much I love having "pictures" to help me along. Though I am now reminded of the overused TV trope about guys only wanting books with pictures in them >_>
I'm not a fatal lover, yeah yeah regardless of my avatar, and I still enjoyed this. Or I just got that lost in all the nice pictures, hehehe.
Excellent way to incorporate all of your big likes into one piece. I'm not sure if I could cram all of mine in this smoothly.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
lol Yeah. I actually got the idea to throw pictures into a story from Kurt Vonnegut, so children's books aren't the inspiration for this sort of thing.
Part of the whole "not-noticing-fatal" thing might be because, while I like vore to be fatal, I tend to prefer it to be subdued and somewhat in the background, which I'm hoping (despite the picture of Sam digesting) came across in the story. Also: Nice pictures! Woo!
As for cramming all my likes into this: Almost everything I like is, as mentioned above, usually in the background and not explicitly stated. That definitely helps with the "smoothness" factor, since nearly everything's implied. For instance, another, unmentioned kink of mine is the whole "disappearance of the prey" kind of thing, which goes hand-in-hand with the "predator getting away with it" thing, but you probably wouldn't specifically have picked that out if I didn't tell you.
Posted by Imrhys 15 years ago Report
We humans are such strange creatures. Just as it is a subtle kink of yours "disappearance of the prey", for me it is being able to see their struggles or at least their form moving within the prey until a sudden moment of finality. But these are little details only the individual really notices, because the moment of finality does not have to be fatal for me. *shrugs* Like I said, we humans can be strange creatures at times.
Posted by Humbug 15 years ago Report
Absolutely. The existence of fetishes proves that.
Posted by daniel2973 13 years ago Report
loved the story and pic's, thank you :)
just wished Samantha didn't pass out so fast.
would have loved to see her squirm and beg for her life inside her stomach, passing out only when the digestion really starts to hurt.
Posted by Humbug 13 years ago Report
Glad you liked it despite the more realistic depiction of what it'd be like in a stomach. :3