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A Chobits request by Rat_Haus. I had added my own OCs into this story. Sureibu translates into Slave, and Eijiki's full name when using her surname Oishii first translates as Delicious Prey. In this story, Sureibu a persocom maid is being treated poorly by her mistress Eijiki. Eventually she gets tired of the abuse and plots her own revenge.

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acrylic

Posted by acrylic 13 years ago Report

I like this.
the idea of your unbirthing is fantastic.

acrylic

Posted by acrylic 13 years ago Report

wish to read more stories like this!

Uke the Chosen

Posted by Uke the Chosen 13 years ago Report

Thanks, I actually thought about writing a short sequel to this. Kind of like how things go with Sureibu now in charge.

LemonBarb

Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report

Looking back at that story. I can't help but wonder if that robot predator ever decided to permanently absorb, or integrate a new victim. Or alternatively, further indulges on her ability to absorb/digitize victims, to her own interests/benefit in the long term?