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This one I wrote a long time ago now, maybe 2003 at a guess? Not quite sure. It's certainly the longest vore story I've written to date (at least that's finished). I wanted to try to show what might happen to someone thrown into a vore situation as the pred with no experience whatsoever. I'll leave the rest for you to find out about for yourself. Enjoy.
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Posted by Darkwarrior676 13 years ago Report
This was on of my earliest favorites story wise!! Thank you for posting this up again.
Posted by Radijs 13 years ago Report
Oh I remember that one. It was great back then and it still is now! I first found it on the Voretex I think.
Posted by Morphy 13 years ago Report
An EPIC tale. One of my favorites for sure.
Posted by Gimlet 13 years ago Report
Thanks Morphy. Been a long time since we chatted. Glad to know you're still going strong. :)
Posted by dimensione510 13 years ago Report
That was awesome! Instant favorite.
Any chance of a sequel?
Posted by StarBomber109 12 years ago Report
I remember this story! Excellent job with it.
Posted by Gimlet 12 years ago Report
Thanks. I'm still a little irritated by some plot inconsistancies, but I seriously doubt I'll get back to re-editing it any time soon. I still like how it came out.
Posted by nyanyan 12 years ago Report
really good story, I've read it more times than I can remember...and enjoyed it every time.
Though, one can't help but wonder...any plans(or even remote chances) for a sequel? or is this as far as it's gonna go?
Again, love the story.
Posted by Gimlet 12 years ago Report
Quite a while ago I started a sequel, but it kind of petered out. I think the idea had some merit, but I couldn't find a way to get the story to flow at all. I got the first major scene done, an introduction to his new job (kind of), but couldn't get it beyond that. OK, I'll give. His new job was going to be for the FBI, retrieving people *ahem* bad guys (permanently retrieving) and good guys (bring those hostages back, then throw them up). I Just couldn't seem to find the logic and feel for the story. Maybe I'll add an 'incomplete' section sometime and post what I did write. I'll think on it.
Posted by nyanyan 12 years ago Report
Well, I wouldn't mind, though, going from an actor, to an FBI agent is a bit of a stretch isn't it? xD
Posted by Gimlet 12 years ago Report
*chuckles* It wasn't his acting skills that got him the job. And he wouldn't have been an agent per se... more a kind of civilian working with them... and getting in agent's way. I was originally thinking a kind of vorish Daniel Jackson (When you positively, definitely have to have them whole and alive)
Posted by nyanyan 12 years ago Report
ok, ok, I'm not trying to push you into writing it a certain way...but...if the FBI was looking for an helper, wouldn't someone more...'normal' have been a better?
I mean, as the only human(or one of, who knows, if one slipped through, more could have xP) he sorta...stands out, and he's not too strong...I'd think Deena would be a better choice, I mean, she's a LOT stronger, bigger, and she's not that noticeable(aside from the whole hot actress thing xP)
Posted by Gimlet 12 years ago Report
Yeah, I know. Like I said it didn't really seem to be coming together. My premise was that his ability to swallow just kept getting better, something to do with his method of travelling to this universe. They wanted him for that. But yes, you're right it doesn't quite hang together. They'd be more likely to lock him away somewhere for research!
Posted by nyanyan 12 years ago Report
lol, yeah, well, either way, I enjoy your stories, so...I can hope for more. *watches* xD
Posted by Phant0m5 12 years ago Report
Wow, I never thought I'd find this story again. it was one of the first (vore related) I ever read. I believe it was on... the mamabliss story archive. which I just checked and is still open, despite having been replaced by mindlessconsumption, and more recently bellystuffed.
and back to the point! sorry ^^;
excellent, excellent read. I don't normally like make preds, but this is a definite exception. thank you :D
Posted by Phant0m5 12 years ago Report
*male
Posted by Gimlet 12 years ago Report
*smiles* I got what you meant
Posted by Gorshum 9 years ago Report
Holy crap I remember this! This was one of my earliest experiences with vore stories and one of my favorites at the time! Man this is nostalgic. I used to go to the Voretex all the time to read this. I can't believe I didn't notice it on here for 3 years ._. Either way though I'm glad to see it's still around!
Posted by Gimlet 9 years ago Report
*Smiles* That's OK, I haven't been checking things much on here in a while, so even if you did notice it I may have not noticed you noticing it.... or something.
Posted by grimsaurus 3 weeks ago Report
This is one of my absolute favorite stories of all time thank you