34Cruise
By CanisLupisVulpe -- Report
These two long going on cruises, but how much longer will their fun last?
Nick goes on a cruise with Chance, Nate and Linda, but how long will it be until he becomes involved with a case?
I'm not too happy with it. I started writing it when I was still in my funk, and the last chapter is rushed.
Killer sperm?
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Posted by WolfFort 15 years ago Report
It is a good story. I DO like the the Prey gets smaller as it enters the Pred concept. It has been a while since I saw some one use it. I also liked the fox being ejected from the cock into the womb. Again I do not see that in stories to much either. Thanks for posting it. :)
Posted by wolfen89 15 years ago Report
Another great chapter. I have to wonder, will Nick ever be able to go anywhere without some kind of case like this coming up? lol