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In Kale's Forest, the Bright Eyed Fey are slowly learning what is required, and what it means, to grow.
A Mystic Wilds story.
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Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
Wow...a brilliantly written story. Loved the digestion descriptions. The innocence of the characters made it all very cute. Thanks for posting this, Bitter! One question, though: Is Mair's digestive process 100% efficient? That is, does she recycle all her food with no waste?
Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report
You've got it. The fey are more spirit than body compared to creatures of other realms, and are therefore capable of absorbing one another almost completely. Anything left over either contributes to their sexual fluids or gets burnt straight off into waste heat if there's too much to convert into useful matter quickly.
Posted by Red_Wolfen 13 years ago Report
Bitter, your writing captures something beautifully transcendental about vore. It's simply fantastic.
Posted by Bitter 13 years ago Report
Thank you very much for your kind words.
However, I'll point out again, for safety, that the themes presented here aren't quite originally of my own design; I cribbed the notion of encountering a good friend being digested by another acquaintance from "A Week With Debbie" by Sentinel. I simply took the idea and ran with it after my own inimitable style.
Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report
Again, you give us an alien world, and make its perspectives seem so natural - the glimpses into the fey's world view. The way they behave around one another. Dané's troubled hesitation about Mair's "innovation" (as it were).
There's an inevitable sadness to this story, but peaceful, too; soothing. A sense of loss (through digestion), tempered with a sense of comfort and beauty.
Posted by Bitter 12 years ago Report
Of all the stories I've set in the Mystic Wilds, I think this one hews the closest to the setting's ideal tone-- strange, pleasant, and a little sad.
Now that I think about it, that's the tagline from Mother 3...
Posted by TootCore 7 years ago Report
Still one of the. Very best stories on all of Eka's.
A true work of art, in thought, concept and execution.
Posted by Bitter 7 years ago Report
That's very high praise! Thank you very much. Hopefully I can get back into the writing groove soon and make something just as good.
Posted by TootCore 7 years ago Report
You're welcome ! c: