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Second in the saga of Lilly the voratious bunny on the show 'Stuff Yourself Silly'. What will the show do now they know they have a carnivorous bunny as a contestant?
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Posted by Jack 13 years ago Report
Oooh, as yummy as the first one. Really nice to read.
Posted by miranda_dragon 13 years ago Report
So, not everyone passed through eh?
Despite this including some things I tend to avoid, I really love this series. :)
You do have a lot of themes I really like, but most of all this is written so well. You're awesome :) <3
Posted by Taris 13 years ago Report
i was gona say, i thought there was a horse in there somewhere.... >:)
Posted by Gimlet 13 years ago Report
*Pokes Lilly's belly* Yup, I'm sure that was a 'neigh' ;)
Posted by miranda_dragon 13 years ago Report
I really love Lilly's attitude toward eating people. One of my favorite type of female pred personalities. :)
Posted by Gimlet 13 years ago Report
Actually normally it isn't mine. I prefer friendly, consensual stuff... but I just like the way this story flows! :)
Posted by miranda_dragon 13 years ago Report
I definitely have space in my heart for both kinds.
Either way, keep it up :)
Posted by Scratch 12 years ago Report
The horse and mouse scene certainly embodied that, fantastic scene and dialogue in and of itself!
Posted by Scratch 13 years ago Report
Awesome followup, Glad to see you're continuing this!
Posted by Gimlet 13 years ago Report
At the moment there will probably be one more in the series, but that's it. I don't know when I'll get time to write it though. Hopefully this year sometime.
Posted by Scratch 12 years ago Report
(Month-later response in 3...2...)
Crud, that long? (half complaining...). Quite a cliffhanger at the end here, I'm left feeling very anxious/curious about the host's fate, and of course eager to see more of this style of vore, expansion on the universe, etc. Your stories are alway fun to read, there's an energy and consistency that's hard to find in vore stories so of course I will be looking forward eagerly to the next installment, even if it means the end of the series.
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
Great story. There were a few scenes where I didn't understand who was talking or thinking, but it was very entertaining overall. I especially liked how you wove the vore elements around a story with many distinct personalities and a specific plot. Actual suspense & character development + erotic scenes = win.
Posted by Gimlet 13 years ago Report
Dang, I've been trying to avoid precisely that. I know when you've got people of the same sex talking back and forth it can be tricky to avoid 'she said, her this,' etc without over using people's names. I thought I'd managed it, darn it. I'll take another perusal through this thing.
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
Eh, it's no big deal, just one or two spots. Overall, I really enjoyed the story--it's got a large amount of great plot and vore as well as some interesting and cute characters. Stories of this quality on Eka's are rare--thanks for posting it!
Posted by MeTheMe 12 years ago Report
Ha, wonderful sequel! At least contestants that want out get out! Though I guess we have to see what her old boss says about that, huh?