Wow! Another wonderful story. Excellent details and digestion. I am glad I am following you, closet monster! It seems the similarity of our avatars is more than a coincidence :) The only thing I don't understand is, I haven't seen the Haruhi show, so is this a plausible occurrence? IE, does Haruhi have some sort of magic powers?
Haruhi basically has the ability to change reality according to her whims but this power is controlled by her subconscious and she doesn’t even know that she has it. Basically, the plot of the series revolves around the SOS Brigade trying to keep her from losing interest in the world so that she doesn’t restructure reality and bring the world to an end.
Thanks, and yes these have been posted directly after completion. So far all of my stories have been started, completed and posted in the same day, with the exception of my first story that sat on my hard drive for several months while I worked up the courage to post.
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
Wow! Another wonderful story. Excellent details and digestion. I am glad I am following you, closet monster! It seems the similarity of our avatars is more than a coincidence :) The only thing I don't understand is, I haven't seen the Haruhi show, so is this a plausible occurrence? IE, does Haruhi have some sort of magic powers?
Posted by Liz 13 years ago Report
Magic powers is an understatement. Without giving too much of the story away - she has God clas powers.
Posted by ClosetMonster 13 years ago Report
Haruhi basically has the ability to change reality according to her whims but this power is controlled by her subconscious and she doesn’t even know that she has it. Basically, the plot of the series revolves around the SOS Brigade trying to keep her from losing interest in the world so that she doesn’t restructure reality and bring the world to an end.
Posted by Liz 13 years ago Report
Interesting - I'm not a scat fan but I liked the story.
I loved the lead up and the actual swallowing, normally I prefer and longer swallow but this one was short, well written and appealed to me.
Posted by ElPortero 13 years ago Report
Another great story! Are you posting these right after you right them? If so, man, you work fast!
Posted by ClosetMonster 13 years ago Report
Thanks, and yes these have been posted directly after completion. So far all of my stories have been started, completed and posted in the same day, with the exception of my first story that sat on my hard drive for several months while I worked up the courage to post.
Posted by Indighost 13 years ago Report
Wow, you are indeed very fast :) In that case I hope you won't mind if I say that I can't wait for the next one!
Posted by deleteduser301 13 years ago Report
This is really amazing, I might just make a comic based on this with your permission of course ^^
What a lucky prey..
Posted by ClosetMonster 13 years ago Report
Feel free to make a comic if you want. I love your work and will look forward to seeing it.
Posted by BabLe7 12 years ago Report
interesting. i don't know how else to describe that.