Hello! This is the third and longest heaven in hell part. Banefaust has accepted his demonic gift and turned into a twisted, yet handsome demon. Felcifu allows him to go out on his own for a while to feed the hunger that comes with every fledgling demon..
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Posted by Bannor 15 years ago Report
A great chapter, and what works well (imo) is how you lead into the devouring so nicely. In any vore-related story, it's expected, yet you carefully built up to it without trying to add surprise, and then gave perfect detail of Banefaust's gluttonous meal. A personal like of mine is a predator that gets aroused by taking another being into his belly. Nice! :3
Posted by Ulquiorra 15 years ago Report
Haha, really? I'm so glad you liked it! I was starting to get the feeling that I was pestering you..asking you to read a third..story! It would seem I only have 2 readers! Haha! I'm extremely glad though that you of all people are one of the two! <3
Posted by Bannor 15 years ago Report
I'm glad I'm following it too. Chances are you have more than just two readers, but it seems most people don't comment, especially on stories. Don't be discouraged by it though. You're good an people will eventually discover you. :3
Posted by Indighost 15 years ago Report
Excellent writing...far and away above most of the Eka's stuff. This one doesn't contain my kinks, but the writing was so good I enjoyed it anyway :) Hope you do more, I love the way you describe emotions and the teasing, sarcastic dialogue of the demoness...I am just waiting for her to betray the man :)
Posted by Ulquiorra 15 years ago Report
Ohhhh ohhh youuuuu..far above most of Eka's stuff! You're teasing me! This means a lot to me, thanks so much! I'm so glad I can give something back to this awesome site.