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This story contains Vore (f/mf) and nudity, just thought I would let you know. Enjoy.
 
Once upon a time there was a cliche introduction sentence and two boys. The boys names were Ron and Tom. Ron and Tom are in high school and go to the same dance class. They don't do it because they have any interest in dancing, they do it because of their very, very attractive dance teacher. This incredible dance teacher's name is Ms.V. The boys enjoyed spending their afternoons following and watching their enticing dance teacher. Eventually their watching turned to following, and following to outright stalking. And on one fateful night as the boys hide in a tree in her yard, peering through the kitchen window. Something special was happening tonight, she brings a man home with her. This was special as they had never seen her with any love interest before. The couple didn't waste any time as they walked and made out into the kitchen. The man pushed her against the kitchen table, passionately moving his hips and lips with hers. As they kissed they promptly started taking off their clothes. Ron then realised this golden opportunity and pulls out his phone and starts recording. Neither Ron or Tom could believe this was happening, but this video should make things much more reminicent. Ms.V got on top of the kitchen table and after removing all her cloths and pausing on her underwear the man steps back to gaze at her. She then daintily removed her big soft bra, dropping it to the floor revealing her massive breasts, each had to be half a foot across, perky, supple, and oh so massive. All those gazing were awestruck. Ron lost his footing and almost fell out of the tree snapping a branch. The man turns his head to the window, hearing the noise. Ms. V, realising she wasnt alone and seeing opportunity jumped on him and engulfed his head and started gobbling him down, quickly taking in his entire body, distending her belly out to be a 3 foot globe. Ron speaks out loud "What the fuck." And their swollen teacher starts heading for the door. The boys startle and jump into the dark yard sprinting as she flys through the back door. Despite her added weight and size she is swift and graceful. The boys run like they are going to be eaten. Tom (A school athlete) takes off leaving Ron in his dust and to the mercy of their sexy, hungry teacher. Ron is running as fast as he and the adrenaline allow him, but it isnt enough and he is quickly tackled by a big, squirming gut. Ms.V, topless, lays her big, man packed belly on top of the squirming Ron, but as soon as his gaze meets her hungry, lust filled eyes he is paralysed, she licks his face with her tongue grinning sadistically. She giggles slightly and then engulfs his head and upper torso, pulling him from under her. Off in a distant bush, Tom watches in horror. Ms.V lifts her meal to the sky letting gravity pull Ron into her gorged belly, expanding her gut, now a massive four foot ball of two tightly packed men. The seductive teacher is tall, at six feet, and is able to lift her belly with a hidden predatorial strength and walks back into her house. Tom is shocked stutters and shakes on his way home.
 
The next morning, Tom is wakes up thinking it must have all been a dream. How could it have been real? He shudders slightly at the supposed dream and gets ready for school. The dream fades to the back of his mind, as all dreams tend to. When he gets to school he notices Ron isn't around. He pulls out his phone and gives him a call. "probably sick" he mutters. As he hits "call" Ms.V just so happened to be walking by in the halls, sporting a slightly bigger tummy. Of course, Tom only notices her already gargantuan breasts seem to have swollen in size looking to be three quarters of a foot in diameter, each. Bigger, and plumper then ever, muffining in her bra under her tight button up shirt. As his phone rings in his ear, his eyes gaze upon his insanely busty teacher, and then he hears the ringing in his other ear. Odd, he thinks it, and removes the phone from his ear to get a better listen. "That's Ron's phone..." he thinks, and spins around, confused, looking for him. But Ron is no where to be seen. Tom looks for the source of the sound and notices it is coming from Ms.V. it's coming from inside his teacher. Ms.V, feeling the vibration from the phone, jiggling her son mid section, realizes what is happening and swiftly walks off to the staff wash room. Tom could do nothing but turn pale as last night came rushing back to him. All through class, and into lunch break, Tom couldn't get his teacher out of his head, which was interesting because he had almost always spent his break thinking about her, but now it was in fear. But what would he do? Let Ms.V eat more and more people? But If he tells on her, no one would believe him and just end up being more of that amazing tit fat. These thoughts rambled his mind, he didn't know what to do, but then he remembered. "Ron's phone!" He almost yelled out loud, but covered his mouth. He remembered Ron recording the incident. "Oh shit! But the phone is in her belly! But wait... it's not dissolved yet, I heard it ring!" Tom muttered to himself, then realised "when she went to the bathroom she was probably going to take it out. I doubt she would throw it out. So, all I gotta do is get it from her."
 
Tom started to scoure the school, not knowing where exactly she might be, first he checked the likely areas, the dance room and the teacher's lounge, unfortunately she was in neither. As he pondered about where she might be, he passed by the teacher's washroom the door flew open in front of him and to his surprise was Ms.V with all of those luscious assets he had forgotten about a moment ago. As her glance came to his, he looked away and continued walking as though he didn't notice she was there (he had done this a lot before). Once she passed by Tom, his mind jerked back to his mission, "finding the phone." Lucky for him, when he turned to follow her, he noticed she was carrying the very phone he was after. Tom checked his watch. "Class soon, I know where she is going." muttered as he followed close behind. Speaking of behinds, Tom couldn't stop looking at Ms.V's sexy round behind until he almost bumped into it, when she stopped to unlock the dance room. His mind came back, "Phone is still in her hand. Good." Tom thought as he trailed into the room, dropped his bag, and got ready for class. Tom looked up as he took off his shoes. Ms.V was walking by, her ginormous breasts, jiggiling as she walked. "Hey, Tom?" She asked. Tom sprang up and straightened his back, "Yes?" he said, slightly startled. "Could you watch the room for me? I need to go get something from the break room." "Sure thing, Ms.V." As she passed, his eyes trailed on following that swaying beautiful butt. Soft, big, and juicy. Once she left he looked back around the room and noticed the phone laying on her desk. Tom almost burst out laughing with his luck. He ran over and grabbed it. It smelt like her teacher, soft and sweet. He opened it up. "Oh my gosh!" he thought, "It works!" Tom navigated through and found the video and played it over. He shivered, it was perfect, just what he needed. The rest of the class was getting ready to start. "She will probably catch me when she notices it's gone... I know what I'll do. Strength in numbers." he thought, then called out to his classmates "Hey guys! Look at this!" His classmates surrounded him and he played the movie. At first they were disgusted, but once they saw her swallow that man whole they couldn't look away. As they intently watched the movie, Ms.V slipped back into the room. She saw the crowd, and then saw Ron's phone missing. She closed the door quietly, and locked it. She was experienced, and very fast. Not one of them could let off a good scream, either from fear or just from being "silenced" before they could. Only a minute later and the room was empty, except for a beautiful mass of writhing belly rising to 7 feet tall and 10 feet wide, and the ever busty Ms.V laying on top stroking her soft beautiful belly. "Now, how do I get out of here...?" She muttered to herself.
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Bright

Posted by Bright 11 years ago Report

How did Mrs V catch up with Ron, even though she had a full belly?

Maybe you should mention that she noticed the boys were peeping?

I think the story were okay to read, although you could use some more paragraphs.

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

(Thank you for the comment <3)
Well, I like to think of her legs having a hidden strength, like any deceptive predator. So basically, I made her ridiculously leg strong in carrying that big full tummy.

She didn't notice they were peeping, but noticed the audible snapping of branches up in the tree. She thought that there MIGHT be someone out there, and she could not be caught with this man, so she quickly devoured him and then ran outside to see if there was anyone, and by chance, there was.

Well, thank you^^
I have noticed you on the discussions a fair amount, so I respect your criticisms.
A little short you mean? Or not spaced out enough?

Dogsqueeze

Posted by Dogsqueeze 11 years ago Report

I liked it.

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

(Thank you for the comment <3)
How about the ending? I can take criticism.

algog8

Posted by algog8 11 years ago Report

The end already? She needs to have the entire school!

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

(Thank you for the comment <3)
I would love to do that, but unfortunately I am just an amateur writer. If I were to do it, it would be quick and shortly done.

algog8

Posted by algog8 11 years ago Report

I don't mind!

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

Hmmmm, I will consider this.

algog8

Posted by algog8 11 years ago Report

Actually, what happens when she does get out of the (now empty) school? :)

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

Eats the whole town, and gets a huge belly. The digestion makes her grow taller and bustier. She then she starts swallowing buildings whole. She continues in her eat and grow process for some time and then eventually eats the earth. After that the vore goddess appears and blesses her with no need of air just so she can swallow Ms.V for herself. The goddess then recreates the world so that the process may happen once more and she may continue to feed on big, plump, voring women.
I am no writer, just a channeler with hands and a competence to type.

algog8

Posted by algog8 11 years ago Report

DO IT!

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

I love these comments, but what I am trying to say is "I can't do it, because when I am not genuinely inspire, my writing is shit."

algog8

Posted by algog8 11 years ago Report

hey, i wouldn't be here if your writing is shit!

Rootin' for ya!

No pressure man, but if you write anything: I'm reading.

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

Cool!
Okay, that is actually really nice to hear :)
Okay, well I was working on something a week ago, I got the first paragraph and some done, I think it's going to be a fun one.
I can't work on it for at least a week though. I am going on a hike and I am writing this from the camp ground right now (which is a couple days from home), so once I get back, I will try to remember and get back to work on that :)
Thanks for your support ^^

algog8

Posted by algog8 11 years ago Report

Best of luck!

algog8

Posted by algog8 10 years ago Report

Got anything? :D

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 10 years ago Report

Heheheheh... (^_^;)
Sorry, I know I am a good writer, but I think I was just going through a phase when I wrote these stories. I really wish I could make these everyday, getting better and better, but I just don't feel inspired to or something. Sorry :/

algog8

Posted by algog8 9 years ago Report

There's no need for apologies, I'm already thankful you wrote this one.

algog8

Posted by algog8 8 years ago Report

Hey, just read this again, Really like it.

About inspiration: Most people have a problem with it when they're expecting every piece to be good.

That's why people write alot when they're killing time. There's no expectation to do well.

If you ask me, I like the idea of a goddess who just feeds on these universe sized women. getting bigger and bigger.

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 8 years ago Report

Yeah, that's a good point. Perhaps I should just do that. Thanks for your advice.

Firefly212056

Posted by Firefly212056 11 years ago Report

I think this story was well put together. You made it so sexy and fun!

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

Hee hee, thanks ^^
Comments as always are LOVED.
(should have scoured Eka's *facepalm*)

Houyo

Posted by Houyo 11 years ago Report

HERE'S A FUCKING COMMENT FOR YOU! YEAH!

XD

But seriously, neat story. I can't really say there's anything wrong with it, but I liked how it got straight to the point. Though more details couldn't hurt.

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

HERE'S A FLIPPING THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING! (and reply)

Thank you ^^
More details eh? In past stories I say stuff like "Her huge jugs (about 2 feet from her chest)," would that do?

Houyo

Posted by Houyo 11 years ago Report

Actually, I have the same problem. That right there is pretty much the base level of details you could get. It's detail yeah, but it's details a drunken frat boy could write. If you seriously want to improve you could try asking other writers here on the site for tips though. I haven't really written that much myself.

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

Well that's the thing though, when you compare size to inanimate objects it doesn't always work. "As big as a beach ball" What is that suppose to mean? 3 feet wide? 1 foot? which is why I just go straight up and say what the fucking size is. Read my "Alyssa - the empty belly" It uses that description method, tell me what you think? (it only starts to get good until after the intro vore. (I am not a good writer though, so maybe you shouldn't read it...)

AwesomeAustin21

Posted by AwesomeAustin21 11 years ago Report

@[email protected] ridicously big belly... would be better with longer vore scenes and a better plot line but overall good!

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

Thanks for the comment ^^
This is where we differ, friend, I like the being inside, you like the act. But I will see if I can increase the length by a little in the future :)

dimensione510

Posted by dimensione510 11 years ago Report

Nice story, I like vore with a sense of humor to it. The opening line in particular made me laugh.

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

(thanks for the comment!)
Haha, thank you ^^
It keeps me entertained while writing :3

the lone Drow

Posted by the lone Drow 11 years ago Report

this was pretty awesome, would like to see more with Ms.V!

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 11 years ago Report

Thanks for the comment friend ^^
WELL, if you read the comments you find her first name is "Alyssa" and that is the name I use in most of my other stories I just put her in different situations and states all lusting for filling her belly.

RenicofVore

Posted by RenicofVore 10 years ago Report

only thing i can say is, detail her eating the class, instead of just saying she does. We all love good detail when it comes to feeding.

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 10 years ago Report

Yeah, I wish I did too, but all I can say is I lost my interest in the story and no longer wanted to continue. If you would like to write an ending for it I can include your name in the text and you may post the entirety where you may please as long as you note me as the writer of the first half.

RenicofVore

Posted by RenicofVore 10 years ago Report

I've been pretty busy as of late, but i will give that some serious thought. Maybe we can talk sometime in the chat room to discuss it further.

Neznamy

Posted by Neznamy 9 years ago Report

Now that was just the story I was looking for today. Great work.

DoniVores

Posted by DoniVores 9 years ago Report

Damn straight it was! I enjoy my works. Thanks for the comment :)