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leo the lion

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this is a mod of a story i made.it has a time correction,because it was stupid the last time.i hope to make a longer version.

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WolfFort

Posted by WolfFort 15 years ago Report

From someone who has grammar trouble like this before. Read it aloud. "if able"
I also encourage you to keep at it, and you will get better if you try.
I think your subject is a good one. A crime fighting voring lion.

masterofvore1

Posted by masterofvore1 15 years ago Report

that's ok...
i'm not very good at this anyway,and have not come for a while because of that.

WolfFort

Posted by WolfFort 15 years ago Report

Don't give up. I have improved greatly, and so can you.