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Set in the world of the IVC, this one is a little different. Be warned that, like most of my "IVC" stories, it does include somewhat explicit references to the outcome of digestion at the end. It is also rather more sexualised than usual, and has been described (below) as "morbid".
I'm aware that the tags may seem contradictory. They cover the different things that happen (and types of vore) in this story.
The vore restaurant, referenced here, was created by bedfordsb. You can read his excellent first story about it here: http://aryion.com/g3/showitem.php?id=166297 .
(Note: Sorry about the slightly messed-up format on this one, namely the large spaces between the paragraphs. To avoid that, simply download the text instead of reading it directly here. Also, if anyone knows how I can correct the problem, that'd be appreciated...)
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Posted by Bitter 12 years ago Report
Gosh, that's morbid.
Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report
It's a little different to what I usually do, indeed....
Posted by Bitter 12 years ago Report
Not that that's a bad thing, mind you! Your craftsmanship is as good as it was the first time I commented on one of your stories. The themes here are just something of a gut-punch.
You need to be punched in the gut every so often.
Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report
Heh... Thanks. I did want to do something a little less pleasant than usual (in particular, to explore what happens when something goes wrong and people become guilty in that setting), though I doubt I'll be doing it very often.
Posted by mojo-2131285 12 years ago Report
Loved it! You're a master at character creation and crafting credible plots, and that's a big challenge when writing about something as fantastical as vore. Keep up the good work, sir!
Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report
Thank you very much!
Posted by huitcinquante 12 years ago Report
I've been waiting this kind of story from you... Guilt is sometimes an interresting feeling, isn't it ? All but morbid, life goes on and that's all...
Et quelle plume !
Merci pour cette belle histoire
Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report
Merci à toi! Ca me semblait intéressant en effet d'injecter un sentiment de culpabilité dans ce type d'histoire, pour voir ce que ça donnerait...
Posted by bedfordsb 12 years ago Report
Yes ... that's certainly very different, but I think in a good way - and it's very original!
Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
Posted by atak 12 years ago Report
Very wonderful story! Hee, in that world, I think it was very inevitable that something like this would happen sooner or later!
I do like that you leave us in the dark for exactly how the little guy felt about his fate. Though he was quite lucky to get swallowed, even if it wasn't the most, relaxing, of times in a stomach!
And the girls do seem to have gotten relaxed and gotten over it fairly quickly!
Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report
Thanks! Yes, I suppose it was bound to happen. ;)
John's feelings about the event are indeed left deliberately unsaid, so that we can focus more on how Sarah feels about that uncertainty... Though her own ultimate, long-run feelings are also left to a certain extent up to the reader.
Posted by vorefanatic314 2 years ago Report
This answered my question, and is exactly what I was getting out of it. Nicely done! The guilty preds are always so much fun!
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
I find guilt to be one of the most erotic aspects of vore, in fact...nice story man :3
Posted by French_snack 12 years ago Report
Well, it was an attempt to try something different. Glad you like it!
Posted by vorefanatic314 2 years ago Report
So, I've always known you are an amazing writer, but I never took the time all these years to read through most of your stories. I just got to this one now, and I must say that this might be my favorite yet. The way you described how intensely she was enjoying everything, even against the guilt, was incredibly hot. I'm curious though, was it deliberate on your part that you didn't describe John's perspective after being swallowed? It did help to make it seem more urgent and upped the ante significantly, so I was just curious. Hoping there's more stories I'll find along these lines!
Posted by French_snack 2 years ago Report
Thank you very much! The mingling of guilt and intense pleasure was rather fun to delve into. :) I preferred to leave John's feelings and experience up to the reader, though. There are different possibilities to imagine, and after all, Sarah never finds out how he felt after she swallowed him.
Posted by vorefanatic314 2 years ago Report
As it should be, seriously great job mate. Can't wait to read more!