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Trade with Bright (http://aryion.com/g4/user/Bright).
Basically, it involves a creature that can take the form of anyone it can eat. Naturally, adventures ensue, people are eaten, lessons (aren't) learned.
It's a bit long for me at ten pages, but the vore occurs right at the beginning and there's more throughout, so don't let that scare you.
Also, a few teenagers get eaten. They're late teens (16, 17) but still thought I should probably mention it.
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Posted by funtime121 12 years ago Report
nice work on it. good to see you have recoverd from your operation.
Posted by dimensione510 12 years ago Report
Thanks! I still have to have eye-drops every few hours (apparently it was infected, which they could only find out after poking me in the eye with a needle a dozen times), but I'm pretty much back to normal.
Posted by Bright 12 years ago Report
Looks really good. Hopefully you were not too annoyed after all my nitpicking.
Posted by dimensione510 12 years ago Report
It was no problem, and I think it improved the quality of the story over-all.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
Pretty good story :) Nice descriptions of the belly
Posted by dimensione510 12 years ago Report
Thanks! I've always been worried my belly descriptions weren't up to par.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
worry not my friend! they're good. but if you are looking for adjectives...:3 i can provide
Posted by dimensione510 12 years ago Report
Sure, I'd love that.
Posted by Indighost 12 years ago Report
ok here we goes...starting with the obvious: bulging, bloated, big, fat, large, huge, stuffed, distended, full, plump, sloshing, weighty, hefty, broad, massive, monolithic, monumental (for epic level vore) heavy, drooping, pregnant, tender, sensitive, vulnerable, glutted, englutted, engorged, warm, delicate, strained, swollen, taut, firm, tight, wobbling, twitching, lurching, gurgling, groaning, undulating (change any verb into an adjective with -ing). Then, throw in adverbs to modify the adjectives: Hugely swollen, urgently groaning, massively full, heavily undulating, etc.
Posted by dimensione510 12 years ago Report
Ah, thanks. I'll try and use these in my next story.