The Secret of Natalie

By TwrchTwryth -- Report

Probably obvious that this was my second or third story (don't remember if this or Advice came first).

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Posted by dragon32078 14 years ago Report

Sorry for taking so long to comment on this story, but it is one of my all time favorites. I first read this story years ago, and it is just as good now. Thank you for the amazing story.

Posted by DRayElliott 12 years ago Report

I think I hate you now.

Posted by J44 12 years ago Report

great story
ever think about writing an alternate ending

Posted by TwrchTwryth 12 years ago Report

Thanks. Honestly, it's been at least eleven years since I wrote this story, so Natalie doesn't come up much any more in my thoughts. But maybe it'll soon be time to check in on her now in her early thirties. How big could she have gotten?