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Theresa's Diary

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Playing with narrative style.

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Aikahime

Posted by Aikahime 15 years ago Report

This was pretty interesting. Certainly unique. Good read!
Do you plan on ever continuing this?

Throat_Wolf

Posted by Throat_Wolf 15 years ago Report

Nice little grab-and-gulp story. You did a great job setting up what was coming, and then writing about it in a believable style. I'm not generally fond of fatal endings, but I can make an exception for writing this good.

Bright

Posted by Bright 14 years ago Report

I think it was very neat. I like the narrative style of this one.