My Mouse - Part 5
By JacktheRabbit -- Report
Part 5 of 5
Plot: Jaabir, a python, happens upon Lichthia, a mouse, as she is foraging. The snake decides to give her three days of life before he consumes her. He intends to keep hunting, and if he catches something before the mouse's time is up, she will be granted a reprieve.
Part five covers the morning after a successful catch, that provides the mouse temporary safety.
My Mouse is a co-written story/RP between me and Tabatha_Cat/Cute_Little_Mouse. Its creation spanned several weeks and over 100k words (counting the continued story, The Dance)
This story is highly vore-themed, but vore itself does not occur in every section.
Ongoing themes include: Unwilling prey, Asphyxiation, Constriction, Gentle/Kind Predator, Internal-Struggles, Digestion, Non-reformation, Death.
Posted by Leika 15 years ago Report
Mm, I remember having a similar RP with Tabatha... unfortunately, we never did get around to finishing it, which I regret. :(
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Posted by Tabatha_Cat 15 years ago Report
We really should finish that. I know I have the logs somewhere. I think towards the end I was having a little more trouble getting into character, as I started to feel ooc'ly sorry for Leica. ^^
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Posted by Greggory 15 years ago Report
I really like this story/RP. Especially some of the early chapters, with them teasing each other. It was a great read and hit all the good spots.
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Posted by JacktheRabbit 15 years ago Report
Thanks :) Glad you enjoyed it, was a lot of fun to write. Just posted the continuation in my gallery if you are interested.
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Posted by Greggory 15 years ago Report
I'm starting it now.
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Posted by Tabatha_Cat 15 years ago Report
There was some missing material from the beginning of Chapter 2. We've put it back in, and it helps with the flow.
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Posted by masterofvore1 14 years ago Report
im confused...did they die?
lol?
according to your description but it wasn't clear...or maybe i cant read... XD
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Posted by JacktheRabbit 14 years ago Report
They fell asleep.
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Posted by masterofvore1 14 years ago Report
lol :)
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Posted by AcevisElecion 12 years ago Report
Finally cleared this out hahaha. May have actually given me a bit of a spark as well.
On top of a lack of motivation, it seemed I could not properly think of how to progress a story based majorly or sometimes solely on a "prey" character(Ace being my primary, Tiara a secondary companion for him). There were plenty of Pred centered stories here and there, but a prey view was just unfathomable for me to get a grip of.
Between this, "The Dance" and the various other arcs, I think you and Tabatha have not only crafted an excellent world(bears repeating), but have finally at least set a template for which I hope to be able to draw inspiration from.
I don't think there are enough words I could truly write to express the sort of inspiration you two and your acquaintances have given me. I only hope I can keep my own word and do so with decent quality. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for the future.
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Posted by JacktheRabbit 12 years ago Report
Cleared out. . . as in all the stories? I'm impressed! And glad to hear they motivated you. :) And thank you so much for the praise. And yes, Tabatha's character Lichthia steals the show in these stories; 'the world' resolves around her.
And eager to see what you come up with in the future as well!
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Posted by AcevisElecion 12 years ago Report
Yes! Everything. Though I just didn't want to make filler comments so I selectively tried to prioritize based on interest.
It's all been there for a few years now in my head, but as I said before, I think after spending a time with these writings, I may have a much better idea of how to progressively integrate the various elements. It really is quite a saving grace to have recently discovered you both only to have you also be the catalyst for what I hope will soon be actual effort on my part to write. I know not when but hopefully soon.
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