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Another few firsts for me--first story with anal vore and first with F/M (at least outside of some writing.com chapters).

Two notes:
--Faye may become a recurring character. I've got some ideas for her. We'll see what happens.
--This story probably would have been more involving as a comic rather than as a story, since a visual would probably be more engaging. However, I cannot draw, and so you get a story instead.

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River

Posted by River 9 years ago Report

Very nice. I didn't think it was hard to follow at all.

Squirelly

Posted by Squirelly 9 years ago Report

I had some trouble with exact logistics and there were a few misused homonyms but overall this is quite good.

Indighost

Posted by Indighost 9 years ago Report

I liked this. I found the logistics hard to follow, but there were plenty of erotic moments, and I very much appreciated the nod towards digestion at the end.

shabbacabba

Posted by shabbacabba 8 years ago Report

You know, I bet someone would be willing to draw this story out. Shryland perhaps? He's quite good. But that's beside the point. This had to be one of the single greatest things I have ever read.