5 Bonding
By JacktheRabbit -- Report
Lichthia becomes very tired (the game wore her out), and soon falls alseep after ariving at the pond with Jaabir.
And so, Jack and Jaabir have a nice chat.
Posted by nyanyan 14 years ago Report
story's a bit off, you cut off some of the beginning, like the travel to the pond, Licthia falling asleep, the start of the conversation, and whatnot, not complaining, just making sure you notice.
also, while I'm here, I figure I might as well ask, 'cause I'm not sure...is Jaabir pronounced J-ah-beer, or what?
I just see it and every once in a while wonder 'am I pronouncing this right?'...
[ Reply ]
Posted by JacktheRabbit 14 years ago Report
Whoops! Thanks for letting me know, I'll fix that later today.
As for Jaabir's name, it's pronounced "Ja BEER" phonetically, for whatever reason I used to want to pronounce it 'ja bar"
In any case, the meaning of the name is actually "comforter" or "The comforter" for some random trivia.
Morathi's name actually means, "A wise man".
Tarik's of course is explained (morning star) though I actually picked his without considering the meaning for a change. it was ironic that the name itself became a big focus, with the idea's of how he got the name (only survivor of his litter) coming to me after.
[ Reply ]
Posted by nyanyan 14 years ago Report
lol, Tarik's name was completely random? and still had such a perfect meaning?...you sir...are a creative genius! xD
and thanks for the Jaabir pronunciation, I had been wondering.
[ Reply ]
Posted by nyanyan 14 years ago Report
*is still waiting patiently for the fix so he can read the missing part of the story*
I'd like to point out the word, patiently, it's been quite a while since you said you'd fix it.
Now, I'm not rushing you, I'm just wondering whether you'll get a chance soon, 'cause I know you've probably got stuff going on and whatnot...and since I don't know what your schedule is, I'm just putting this here to remind you in case you'd forgotten.
Probably the last time I'll post a reply, 'till something in one of the other stories catches my eye... rhyming...wow...random rhymes happen to me a lot...it's weird...anywho, sorry for the bother ^.^
[ Reply ]
Posted by JacktheRabbit 14 years ago Report
Done ^^ I'm often away or doing projects through a good chunk of the day, so my schedule is a bit sporadic.
[ Reply ]
Posted by nyanyan 14 years ago Report
ok, much appreciated, and don't worry, as I said, I'm not rushing you xP
[ Reply ]