Smörgårdsbord...perhaps...considering the time of year, perhaps a Julbord...(The same deal, but more tradition and well...holliday bound.)
I love it. I also love the continuabillity (not even a real word, is it?) of this one. The questions and hints that are given and the in the action ending. I really, really, really want to see this one continue, preferably from where it left off and not like your Morgan series, from some other point in the future.
There's just so much juicy potential where they are at the moment without that much buildup. Not that I dislike build-ups, but another story with these girls could pile the build-up on new hopefully as interesting characters, like Irene. (Whom I half wonder if the has an auburn and wide-hipped sultry looking friend called Helen?)
Also...am I the only one that got the impression that Sabrina was pretty damn dark despite a white parent? And that she had a more trim and slender build than the normal stereotypical american-black girl as if her heritage was more the pitch-black african kind rather than the brown african westcoast kind?
I started a sequel earlier this year, actually, but it's moribund at the moment. According to the file, I haven't written anything in it since May 8. Basically, I thought I had two good ideas and after I've written the first part I'm having a lot of difficulty getting to the second part. Hopefully I'll get back to it sometime, but it's all about what I have inspiration for.
Maybe? I lost the work that I had started on it and just haven't come back to it. Could be fun to write them again, but with a lot on my pate right now, writing wise, I can't make any guarantee.
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Posted by shabbacabba 14 years ago Report
vorgasbord indeed! lol
Posted by Indighost 14 years ago Report
Another good story. I lost track of who was who but the swallowing and digesting was all very pleasant.
Posted by RachelBabe 14 years ago Report
I wanna see more from these girls okay?
Posted by Throku 14 years ago Report
Smörgårdsbord...perhaps...considering the time of year, perhaps a Julbord...(The same deal, but more tradition and well...holliday bound.)
I love it. I also love the continuabillity (not even a real word, is it?) of this one. The questions and hints that are given and the in the action ending. I really, really, really want to see this one continue, preferably from where it left off and not like your Morgan series, from some other point in the future.
There's just so much juicy potential where they are at the moment without that much buildup. Not that I dislike build-ups, but another story with these girls could pile the build-up on new hopefully as interesting characters, like Irene. (Whom I half wonder if the has an auburn and wide-hipped sultry looking friend called Helen?)
Also...am I the only one that got the impression that Sabrina was pretty damn dark despite a white parent? And that she had a more trim and slender build than the normal stereotypical american-black girl as if her heritage was more the pitch-black african kind rather than the brown african westcoast kind?
Posted by iliapoerion 14 years ago Report
You are (according to google) one of only 5 people to have ever typed the phrase "understated masturbation" (6 including me).
Congratulations!
Posted by Blahblahbum 10 years ago Report
Will we ever see any more of these preds? They were awesome!
Posted by TwrchTwryth 10 years ago Report
I started a sequel earlier this year, actually, but it's moribund at the moment. According to the file, I haven't written anything in it since May 8. Basically, I thought I had two good ideas and after I've written the first part I'm having a lot of difficulty getting to the second part. Hopefully I'll get back to it sometime, but it's all about what I have inspiration for.
Posted by UnbirthLover 10 years ago Report
You certainly do have a sexy mind, TwrchTwryth... This is hot hot hot!
Posted by Blahblahbum 8 years ago Report
Will there ever be a sequel? This is awesome!
Posted by TwrchTwryth 8 years ago Report
Maybe? I lost the work that I had started on it and just haven't come back to it. Could be fun to write them again, but with a lot on my pate right now, writing wise, I can't make any guarantee.
Posted by Blahblahbum 8 years ago Report
I'll take a maybe anyday!