The thrill. The thrill took him in that moment. The final steps in the tribal dance of the hunt. He seized the control, then. Felt the familiarity of it, the comfort, a hand in a well-worn glove.
This is just... exquisite. Your characters are fascinating,your writing style flows effortlessly and the description is brilliantly original. This isn't just one of the best pieces of vorarephilia I've read in a long time. It's one of the best pieces of writing.
Also, may I congratulate you: normally, human shaped preds are really not my thing, but here... I was simply enthralled. Well done indeed.
Why thank you! Thank you kindly.
I am humbled by what you said - that the quality of writing "surpasses" simple vorarephilia. I endeavored to make it character-driven. Trying to ensure the characters drive the vore; not the vore itself.
As for human-shaped characters (hehe), if it is any consolation, Danny is humanoid - not entirely human. Not at all (;
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Posted by Kitti 14 years ago Report
Beautiful!
You're writing is so... indulgent. <3
Posted by nephilim 14 years ago Report
Thank you so much!
Posted by Isola 14 years ago Report
That was lovely.
Posted by nephilim 14 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed!
Posted by TheGuyWhoKnows 14 years ago Report
This is just... exquisite. Your characters are fascinating,your writing style flows effortlessly and the description is brilliantly original. This isn't just one of the best pieces of vorarephilia I've read in a long time. It's one of the best pieces of writing.
Also, may I congratulate you: normally, human shaped preds are really not my thing, but here... I was simply enthralled. Well done indeed.
Posted by nephilim 14 years ago Report
Why thank you! Thank you kindly.
I am humbled by what you said - that the quality of writing "surpasses" simple vorarephilia. I endeavored to make it character-driven. Trying to ensure the characters drive the vore; not the vore itself.
As for human-shaped characters (hehe), if it is any consolation, Danny is humanoid - not entirely human. Not at all (;