Well, there certainly seems to be *something* developing between Ooma and our viewpoint character...should be fun to see where that leads. ;)
Oaw still comes across as a fairly flat character to me, but it occurs to me that given her origins that may simply be who she *is* -- a living weapon still executing its primary function. And narratively, if the story calls for the whole vore plot to come crashing down after all, *she's* the perfect candidate for taking the fall...
And part of me is still waiting for Hans to wake up and realize that he's just had a horribly guilty erotic nightmare for the last few episodes after being knocked out once too often. ;) Okay, probably not, but the villains do seem to be winning ridiculously easily right at the moment. Time will tell.
Regardless of what else happens, I'd have to agree with Scion that I'd like to see Ooma, if not outright 'win', then at least get away -- possibly with some fox in her gut (or wherever), possibly just to keep bedeviling him in the future. But I'm weird like that. ;)
Ooma kicks ass! (and swallows it). Gotta say I hadn't pictured her quite so massive until now, but I like it! You're the only author I've ever seen use the word 'caboose' well either ;-D
Keep up the incredible work, you're an amazing writer!
While there aren't a lot of concrete size values for anybody to be found in the story, back in chapter 2 Ooma is credited with a cock "four feet in length, minimum" -- and that's while not even aroused yet and before we first see her eating anybody. And no matter how exaggerated her proportions may be, she can obviously still move pretty fast with both that and all her other endowments.
I know you posted this a while back but let me just say that I have really enjoyed reading this series so far and am looking forward to whatever you create next. One of the things I check for every time I log in here is a continuation of your story, you've done a great job so far and I hope you haven't left us. It'd be a shame to lose such a great contributor.
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Posted by Scion 14 years ago Report
you know, I really hope ooma wins in the end, and keeps absorbing people
Posted by Mark 14 years ago Report
Well, there certainly seems to be *something* developing between Ooma and our viewpoint character...should be fun to see where that leads. ;)
Oaw still comes across as a fairly flat character to me, but it occurs to me that given her origins that may simply be who she *is* -- a living weapon still executing its primary function. And narratively, if the story calls for the whole vore plot to come crashing down after all, *she's* the perfect candidate for taking the fall...
And part of me is still waiting for Hans to wake up and realize that he's just had a horribly guilty erotic nightmare for the last few episodes after being knocked out once too often. ;) Okay, probably not, but the villains do seem to be winning ridiculously easily right at the moment. Time will tell.
Regardless of what else happens, I'd have to agree with Scion that I'd like to see Ooma, if not outright 'win', then at least get away -- possibly with some fox in her gut (or wherever), possibly just to keep bedeviling him in the future. But I'm weird like that. ;)
Posted by Sora 14 years ago Report
Great stuff! I agree Scion, go Ooma!
Posted by soline 14 years ago Report
Ooma kicks ass! (and swallows it). Gotta say I hadn't pictured her quite so massive until now, but I like it! You're the only author I've ever seen use the word 'caboose' well either ;-D
Keep up the incredible work, you're an amazing writer!
Posted by Mark 14 years ago Report
While there aren't a lot of concrete size values for anybody to be found in the story, back in chapter 2 Ooma is credited with a cock "four feet in length, minimum" -- and that's while not even aroused yet and before we first see her eating anybody. And no matter how exaggerated her proportions may be, she can obviously still move pretty fast with both that and all her other endowments.
So, yeah. BIG salamander. ;)
Posted by Readasaur 14 years ago Report
I think I'm the only one hoping the villains lose here, but I'll hope with all my might! XD
Posted by PsychoKrows 14 years ago Report
I know you posted this a while back but let me just say that I have really enjoyed reading this series so far and am looking forward to whatever you create next. One of the things I check for every time I log in here is a continuation of your story, you've done a great job so far and I hope you haven't left us. It'd be a shame to lose such a great contributor.